wow... that was really good! Very emotional, very good. I really like it.Author's Response: Aww thank you. I've only gotten one other review on this :) Report Review
Oh - I can really feel the survivors' guilt in this piece, and it just breaks my heart. This is very well done, and the voice is very strong. I could tell it was Sirius before he said his name - that's a good sign that you invoked his character well. Here's a line I was drawn to: "Oh I remember that fiery charm." That's sweet and...evocative, you know? Love it. I also like that there is a sense of faint hope in the final paragraph. It's that faint hope that allowed him to survive in Azkaban, I'm guessing. This is terrific. PalomaAuthor's Response: Your my first ever reviewer on this story. Thank you bunches. I did love this peice myself as Sirius is one of my favorites characters Report Review
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