Are you planning to update soon? . . . I look forward to it!

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please kee writting this! it's soo cool!

Author's Response: Thanks! I was planning on writting more since I have lots of time during Christmas break but there is an overload on all the ficcys so I can't...

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short. But i liked it still. Once agian, if it is centered, it is hard to read.

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Well an interesting start. Try not to have it centered. A little bit hard to read.

Author's Response: Okay. I didn't even think about that since I'm so used to centered stories... I was planning on writting more since I have lots of time during Christmas break but there is an overload on all the ficcys so I can't...

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You are very talented; your story is creative and your writing style is wonderful and original. I really hope you'll keep on writing this story--it is wonderful indeed! :o)

Author's Response: Thanks! I was planning on writting more since I have lots of time during Christmas break but there is an overload on all the ficcys so I can't...

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this is very good. its slightly deppressing but it has enough behind it to get you intrested. i would love to read more.

Author's Response: Thanks! Well, once you get to know me my mood is either very depressed and morbid or really wild and hyper. And I had mono while I wrote this so I was depressed...I'm a very morbid person. I can't help it. Yes, it does have alot behind it. Thanks for the review!

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