Wow, that was a great chapter, full of details and emotions. It's nice to see Han, Leia and Luke again. hehe. And meeting Harry Potter... it's priceless!
I loved that you changed the point of view as best suit the storytelling. And you did this without it being confusing. Few authors are good enough to be able to do so. Amazing job!
Susan has a lot of empathy, eh? Especially when Anakin is concerned. I can't wait to see them training with the Jedi! I'm really enjoying reading this story. *hugs* Report Review
The beginning was sweet. Only Harry was unfazed - he's become quite the leader, eh? But of course, he wouldn't be Harry if he weren't suspicious, if just slightly.
The lightsabers fight was great, especially with the kids casting spells. The Four Founders' items are really useful. It's a good thing they could destroy the Horcruxes without actually destroying them. But I guess their magic was too powerful.
I loved it that you used the word 'tricks' at the end. Only a person of great powers can speak so casually of magic or of the Force. hehe. That was good! And the bit about Ginny and Jenna was great too.
Amazing chapter! The more I read, the more I love this story. *hugs*
You know, it's my first cross-over. And, wow!, Star Wars and Harry Potter! I've been meaning to read this for months (a year?!), but when I read one of your stories, I don't want to have to rush through it.
I'd never thought of all the things from the Potterverse that could make a difference in the Star Wars universe, and I guess there are things from the Star Wars universe that could make a difference in the Potterverse. But of course, you thought about all this! And the story you're weaving here is just great.
And it's so sweet that Susan is falling for Anakin. But what will happen when they will go back to Hogwarts? I don't know why, but I've always liked Susan. lol. She seems to be such a nice girl.
Great chapter! Anakin is going to see Jaina again! That's worth another 10. ;) Report Review
This is just BRILLIANT!!! They heard Anakin's (*slaps forehead* The Yuuzhan Vong... I just couldn't remember their name when I left my review for chapter 7.) story and of course they were still a bit suspicious (too bad Harry never borrowed Dudley's books.). And they told him about the Wizarding World and the Boy-Who-Lived... Did he believe them? Was he suspicious? He can hear them talk when they use telepathy... could they hear him if he tried to talk to them?
I loved the bit about calling Luke 'master', hehe. They almost took out their wands! I love that you don't make them sound too adult. And yet they aren't kids anymore. You really wrote them very well. Oh, and I'm glad Harry decided to stay... hehe. I loved your dialogue. It flows. The whole flows. It's an amazing story. Awesome job!
*hugs* ~Anne Report Review
Anakin Solo, eh? Han Solo and Princess Leia's third child. Good. I had been wondering when in the Star Wars universe history you had sent Harry and the Founders' Brigade. (Or have you created another character named Anakin Solo?)
They were horribly disfigured and seemed to barely be a member of the human race. Um, yeah, I guess Mr 'I Want A Pure Wizard Race But I Look Like A Snake' Tom Riddle would die of fright (envy?) just looking at them. lol. They attacked the kids with blades and yet they wore body armors? Very intriguing. Where were they teleported?
The fight was amazing. Magic against technology! That was just great! Loved it!!! (Uh, you're probably going to see a lot of '!', but you know I'm a HP fan and a Star Wars fan, so... However you can start being concerned - or annoyed - when I start 'SQUEing!!!' like a fangirl.)
*hugs* ~Anne Report Review
OMG! He did it! Ron's proposal was so sweet. And Hermione's response was too. You did great. It was truly romantic. And it wouldn't have been as perfect without the ring. (You were right, there must be a ring, but I wasn't wrong, because love is the most important - and the two make a perfect proposal. :P) All the more so that it's not gold and diamond. I don't know, it's just so... Ron.
You cracked me up with your Draco saying: "You gave me muggle medicine?" Your characterizations are perfect, as they always are. But your Harry is the one I like best. In his role as leader, he's both one to search in books and train physically. Your grown-up Harry (the one in this fic, who is still a teen, and the ones in your other stories) will always be my favorite among all the adult Harry written in fanfics. I doubt JKR could do better.
Ooh, Dudley's books (he probably never read them)... Why do I have the feeling that... Oh my. lol. Can I borrow those books???
I loved this chapter! Amazing job... Report Review
It's my 600th review. Of course, it's for my favorite author.
Hermione uttered, ‚ÄúBloody Hell!‚ÄĚ
‚ÄúMione, that‚Äôs Ron‚Äôs line.‚ÄĚ Harry said.
It's also for this that I'll never get enough of your writing. For those little bits that crack me up that you hide in plain sight here and there.
I love it when Ron plays the perfect big brother. Especially when you write his lines and actions. hehe. That was good. And I love it when you pair up Neville and Luna. Those two are so made to be! LOL. (You think they should pop in in our fic???)
The stories you have created for the four items are just great. I love what they can do, and why some members of the DA are better suited to use them than others. You are weaving here a unique story, like you always do. Can I say it again: I love how your mind work. hehe.
Oh, and I love your Harry. He's truly grown a lot. Most people write their grown-up Harry like the kid he was at 11, throwing in some adult thoughts and actions. Not you. Your characterization is faultless. He's still Harry but he's a man. He's become a true natural leader.
Amazing chapter. 100/10!!! But I'll have to settle for a 10...
Anne Report Review
I love the scene with Harry and Ginny. He admitted how hard it was to be away from her, to know that maybe he would never be with her again. And yet it was not a cheesy scene. It was romantic, and their love, their friendship too, were evident in their interactions. You did great. And I love the way he proposed and her answer. lol.
Your Trio. The three are so atuned to each others. It's obvious in their interactions. They really complete each others, each with their strenghs - and weaknesses - and abilities. You wrote them very well, and in character. The part about pure magic - that was a brilliant idea! I love it. And of course the sword was what Harry needed... You make it really more than the sword we saw in CoS, and I love that.
Oh, and I love the scene with Ron and Hermione... and the ring. hehe. Good to see that he can make her blush and stammer. lol. ;)
You are SO amazingly talented.Author's Response: Thanks. I loved writing this chapter. It was fun. Report Review
I think it's a great idea to have given Harry, Ron and Hermione mindspeech/telepathy (even if most readers would disagree, because they think it's either cliched or just not right in the Potterverse - I've always been interested in those abilities, hehe). Tactically speaking, it's a useful trick, of course, but IMO it adds to the magic of the Potterverse, of the story and of the Trio.
For once, I think that the reason why Draco changed side is believable. It wasn't just one second he was a bad boy, the next he saw the light. Whatever were his thoughts when he failed to kill Dumbledore, it took him months to make up his mind and come back to Hogwarts. I love McGonagall's remark to Ron and Draco, at the end. And even to see Ginny and Draco side together because they are left out of the telepathic convo. hehe.
McGonagall incognito in the Hog's Head, giving Harry Godric's Sword... That's something she would do. Of course she was upset to know the Horcruxes were inside the castle - she's really one to protect her charges, whatever it may take, eh? But she's a sensible woman, and Harry, Ron and Hermione are her charges too. And of course, she wants to see the end of Voldemort.
I'm glad Ginny is part of the group. And let me tell you that there's one thing I love in your stories: you always make sure that the reader knows that Ron is not just Harry's best friend, that he too has abilities neither Harry nor Hermione have. He's not just a sidekick - IMO, Jo herself should do that, because most people think Ron is a weakling (or why would they dismiss him so easily in most fics?)
Amazing job again. *hugs* ~AnneAuthor's Response: You're right on all accounts I hope the sword and all the artifacts have some more powers than just being "there" like I think Jo will do with them. Report Review
Yes, Harry's definitely grown up a lot... Can I say: "YAY! Nagini is no more!"? lol. Great writing, as always.
~AnneAuthor's Response: Yes, he has and I loved the way he took care of nagini. Report Review
I had to start reading that fic one day, being a SW fan. lol. Great start! An UV, no less! Yes, I do agree with the way you read Harry - and I know most people wouldn't: he grew up a lot in HBP. And I guess Draco did too. As for Albus portrait, well, I love the idea that he's dead, but not gone.
~AnneAuthor's Response: Thanks. I liked this story. I've got the last chapter, just have to post it. Report Review
Holy crap Batman!! Star Wars cross-over!! I'm doing the happy dance. I'll admit.......ole Mum Weasley is a Star Wars freak!! lol I was 5 years old when Ep 4 came out & it was my 1st big screen movie! I've read all of the books.....over 100 (non fan fiction) of them. I don't know where the heck you're leading us with this Sage, but I can't wait to see......Oh please let Chewie be in this...please, please, please....lolAuthor's Response: Sorry, sniff, chewie's not in here. sniff sniff. It is set after Chewie died. Its set a number of years after Anakin Solo died against the Yuuzhan Vong. Hope you enjoy. Report Review
wow...theyre just doing it eveywhere arent they...Author's Response: Those dang exhibitionists!!!! Report Review
I LOVE THE TWINS, THE ROCK THE HOUSE!!!!Author's Response: I do too. They are so much fun to write. Report Review
wow...i love this story...Author's Response: Ohhh, thank you! Report Review
MALFOY GOT PWNED!!!!Author's Response: I don't know what PWNED means... guess I'm showing my age. Report Review
YOU EVIL BASTARD!!! WHY!?!?!?!?!?! ....oh well. im only a click away form the next chapter, so it doesnt matter...Author's Response: What? (looking innocent) I didn't do anything that bad... Report Review
woot!!! HAN OWNS YOU NOOBS!!!Author's Response: yes he does Report Review
ANOTHER ANAKIN CLONE!!!! INSANE!!!!Author's Response: clones clones everywhere not an ounce to fight. Report Review
sweet...battle plans...cool...Author's Response: Thank you very much Report Review
aww how sweet... *sniff*...i promised my self, i wouldnt...cry...*breaksouy into tears*Author's Response: Here's a virtual Hanky Report Review
OMG!!! THEY HAD...*lowers voice to faint whisper*...sex!!!!Author's Response: Yes they did, and they thought it was good! Report Review
ooo, harry's in trouble!!!!Author's Response: lol Report Review
yes. it is VERY SHORT!!!! it really isnt much of a chapter, just a chapterette. but a good chapterette.Author's Response: Thank you, I just had to have something to bridge the two chapters Report Review
soo, not only are they wizards, but now theyre goin to be jedi? lucky pricks...Author's Response: Sorry, life ain't always fair! lol Report Review
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