{reviewid: 2379456, reviewer: 'Canadianginny'}
16th July 2010:
You really need to improve you grammar. You are constantly mixing up 'too' and 'to'. I would also suggest spell check, not only for spelling but also for grammar errors. Perhaps, you could even have someone else read it for you, having someone else's eyes checking for errors could be beneficial.
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{reviewid: 1590553, reviewer: 'twins_ROCK'}
22nd August 2007:
i don't think it's dreadful, it just needs some fine tuning, thats all.
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{reviewid: 1590456, reviewer: 'twins_ROCK'}
22nd August 2007:
ah how sweet(ish)
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{reviewid: 1590435, reviewer: 'twins_ROCK'}
22nd August 2007:
hm.maybe you should tell part of the story from draco's POV
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{reviewid: 1553013, reviewer: 'Lovely_Slytheriness'}
4th August 2007:
I adore this story! It´s so wonderful, but I so HATE Lucius for destroying their family the way he does by cotrolling Draco...
Oh well, amazing story, love it, keep up the great work! I cant wait to see where you are taking this =) 10/10
~Linnéa
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{reviewid: 1539933, reviewer: 'HJG'}
29th July 2007:
GREAT STORy can't wait to see what happens next
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{reviewid: 1537959, reviewer: 'Tigermusic'}
28th July 2007:
awsome..keep it up :D
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{reviewid: 1537303, reviewer: 'TheHerioneHermione'}
27th July 2007:
no, its really good! i really like it!
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{reviewid: 1537292, reviewer: 'TheHerioneHermione'}
27th July 2007:
aw, they are going to get a divorice, i think.
Author's Response: naw.
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{reviewid: 1537274, reviewer: 'TheHerioneHermione'}
27th July 2007:
I knew it, i knew it
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{reviewid: 1537265, reviewer: 'TheHerioneHermione'}
27th July 2007:
so so so very happy that it is not ron and hermione, but truely i think harry and hermione should be together...but alas, i am a sucker for forbiddin love...
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{reviewid: 1537249, reviewer: 'TheHerioneHermione'}
27th July 2007:
ooh, stemy :)
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{reviewid: 1537239, reviewer: 'TheHerioneHermione'}
27th July 2007:
I like it, really good.
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{reviewid: 1298515, reviewer: 'meg'}
7th February 2007:
hope your all right and also that youll update soon i like this story a lot and want to keep reading it
Author's Response: SORRY! Things have been happening. Sometimes I don't think I'll ever update. Lol. It's been like almost a year. But it'll happen. I promise. One day.
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{reviewid: 1298494, reviewer: 'meg'}
7th February 2007:
"Her and Draco were making final adjustments on there wedding,"
fyi that should be "She and Draco" or Draco and herslef"
still like the story
Author's Response: Thanks. :]
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{reviewid: 1298470, reviewer: 'meg'}
7th February 2007:
i like your story im anxious to continue . . .but just so you know you switched from 1st to third and back again.
"As if he had read MY mind (A/N: which he had sh!), he leaned in and kissed HER.
MY shock . . . "
instead of her you would want to say me ;)
Author's Response: Lol. I seem to do that a lot. Thanks for telling me. :]] And thank you for reviewing.
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{reviewid: 1201236, reviewer: 'Breaking%20Free'}
20th November 2006:
Hey I just wanted to say that I LOVE your story. I'm addicted to it. When I first read it I couldn't take my eyes off the screen. I hope you update soon. Bye!
Author's Response: *runs from angry mob while typing* I will update soon! I know I've been saying that for the last few months, but I will. Please believe me this time. Lol. You'll have it sometime this weekend. Thanks for sticking by me. :]]
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{reviewid: 1201147, reviewer: 'sammm'}
19th November 2006:
i like this story, i can't wait till you update!!
Author's Response: I will. Thanks for reading. =]]
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{reviewid: 1167070, reviewer: 'dragon_lyoness2022'}
17th October 2006:
PLEASEEEEEE UPDATE SOON
Author's Response: I will. =[[ Thanks for reading.
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{reviewid: 1145563, reviewer: 'dragon_lyoness2022'}
24th September 2006:
great story.i loved it please updatw soon
Author's Response: i will try. ive been super busy. gah. its been a LONG LONG time since i updated. I just started high school. lol. thanks for the review. =]
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{reviewid: 1142174, reviewer: 'dracos_lover365'}
20th September 2006:
excellent more please it has a very good plot plese more
Author's Response: ill try. thanks for the review. =]
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{reviewid: 1142172, reviewer: 'dracos_lover365'}
20th September 2006:
excellent
Author's Response: thank you. =]
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{reviewid: 1142159, reviewer: 'dracos_lover365'}
20th September 2006:
excellent
Author's Response: thank you, dear. =]
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{reviewid: 1142150, reviewer: 'dracos_lover365'}
20th September 2006:
excellent
Author's Response: yay! thanks alot. =]
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{reviewid: 1142140, reviewer: 'dracos_lover365'}
20th September 2006:
excellent
Author's Response: yayayayayay! thank you. =]
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