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Review #1, by LunaB1134 Secrets

24th May 2006:
Oh my GOD. Can this story get any better? Honestly, I would never have thought of James having a twin. Especially the whole ying yang thing, like in Avatar, would have completely missed me. I love how they snog behind tapestries. The only problem is i wish they wouldn't have to snog behind tapestries. Agh must KILL TOBY! I'm feeling homicidal, can you tell? :) And I love how you have Alice Lily's friend, it was always very logical to me. Gold star for the little things that are canon. (which, by the way, include Sirius' attitude towards Lily, Potter dead, and so many other things).
Also, I LOVE your James kisses. They make me feel heady and want to throw up of happiness. Especially how you keep his eyes hazel. (On a side note, do you fancy his glasses are rectangular or circular? I fancy more rectangular.) And he is so heroic, omgggg. *loves james*

Secretly, I have always loved the idea of Snape stalking Lily (has watched too much Phantom of the Opera). It seemed so THRILLING, and even a bit canon, if you consider snape and lily and the potions aptitude, and yeah. It thrilled me very much. HA HA STALKING. Stalker. And you put in Remus! WITH MILK! YAY! ...yes, i am a remus fangirl, however did you guess? ^_^

Language was also a very good part of this, i liked lily's perspective on (of course) the kisses. How she craves james and all that, and just the general mysterious one-shot style . Excellent chapter! ~Luna

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Review #2, by Loui Secrets

29th January 2006:
You write REALLY good. I mean, really, really well. Even though you jumped from such different characters like Lily and Bella I totally understand their ideas and values, it's just so... realistic!!!! Keep up the great work!!!!

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Review #3, by LunaB1134 Bellatrix

22nd December 2005:
This is REALLY REALLY REALLY good. I found where your potatoes went! They skipped out of your L/J fluff and decided to hop onto the slytherin table, where they met an untimely end. *sob*. Anyways, I do like this story, and you describe the whole Dark Mark process really well. The Cissy thing is an interesting twist. I like how Bella is forced to marry Rodolphus but Rabastan is in love with her. *sad* Keep updating this!

Author's Response: Yeah, hoppin' potatoes are my specialty! The Cissy thing is REALLY impportant, so don't forget!! I love the Rabastan thing, personally. I think he's one of the misunderstood ones in this story. And Bella's Sirius obsession is important too. Oh, in case you didn't guess, she's obsessed. Thanks for reviewing!! *Goes off to finish second chapter that she started in November...or was it October...

Author's Response: Yeah, hoppin' potatoes are my specialty! The Cissy thing is REALLY impportant, so don't forget!! I love the Rabastan thing, personally. I think he's one of the misunderstood ones in this story. And Bella's Sirius obsession is important too. Oh, in case you didn't guess, she's obsessed. Thanks for reviewing!! *Goes off to finish second chapter that she started in November...or was it October...

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Review #4, by pearluna Bellatrix

17th November 2005:
wow. that was really well done. I felt like I was in Bella's head... it was so realistic. are you going to do another chapter? please do.

Author's Response: Thanks! I am going to do another chapter, I want to get throught most of the MWPP era girls, but the ol' fanfiction fingers have gotten some arthritis lately....I'll have some more stories up soon!

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