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Reading Reviews for Monsters in my head.
5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by JesseBlack Ratboy and dreams

1st May 2007:
HI! nice start, i like it:) keep writing!

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Review #2, by Rynn Ratboy and dreams

31st May 2005:
Hey, it's a good story, even if you haven't written in a few years, I say you should reconsider. It's got a wonderful idea for the theme, do write more or I'm very tempted to steal your idea (though I wouldn't because I'm not a theif :) ) well, cheers

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Review #3, by mundungus fletcher Ratboy and dreams

4th October 2003:
The second chapter was hilarious! I've never seen it from that point of view, Voldemort getting...old! Geez, keep it up! However, there are two things I'd like to point out to you: One, unless you delberately did it, it's Goyle, not Coyle. And two, maybe you should work on sentences a bit more. You know, like not jamming everything into one sentence, but separating them...using commas, and full stops and all. But...I repeat, this was FUNNY! I want Voldemort to get a pension!

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Review #4, by Arwen Ratboy and dreams

1st October 2003:
p.s, you can borrow some of my orcs to hurt peeps that don't review if u like!!! Poor Voldie, i wonder why he was crying!!!! NOT!!! Good story!!

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Review #5, by Arwen Ratboy and dreams

1st October 2003:
heehee, u make me laugh too!!! this is great, and i'll continue to review if u continue to write!! deal?? Arwen

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