{reviewid: 2051311, reviewer: 'jenna'}
8th February 2009:
AWW. i loveddd this story. great job
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{reviewid: 1951055, reviewer: 'sana'}
13th June 2008:
hello there. this story was absolutely wonderful. i got so emotionally involved into it tht by the end of the story, i actually cried. n this has been the 1st time i've cried after reading a fan fiction. it was just fabulous. i hope u keep up the good work.
Author's Response: glad you like it... I haven't been writing much fanfiction lately. I may get back into it again.
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{reviewid: 1795388, reviewer: 'lcplpotter'}
17th January 2008:
omg i cant belive u killed him i loved this story till the last two chapters it was a briliant story and i can admit the last two scenes made me cry which is something i never do brilliant story well done!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. Sorry about killing him, lol.
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{reviewid: 1472910, reviewer: 'EternalGold394'}
21st June 2007:
I know you wrote this story a long time ago and that there is a completed sequel and everything but I just had to say that this entire story was well-done, brilliant and this chapter in particular had me nearly sobbing. 20/10.
Author's Response: Thanks a bunch
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{reviewid: 1451331, reviewer: 'kasbrina69'}
6th June 2007:
I had so many tears streaming down my face reading your story. I loved it so much and it has all my predictions for the final book, I'm glad you wrote this using the 'sacrifice' death of Harry Potter. Thanks for writing this amazing story once again!
Kendra~
Author's Response: Thanks
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{reviewid: 1422402, reviewer: 'GrangerFan31'}
18th May 2007:
Poor Hermione.Nice lol.
Author's Response: Thanks
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{reviewid: 1420863, reviewer: 'Gred_Forge'}
17th May 2007:
I enjoyed your story, it was sad but well written. Good job.
-ALy
Author's Response: Thanks!
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{reviewid: 1295647, reviewer: 'Natalie'}
5th February 2007:
This was an amazing story.. Very well written and very detailed.. I cant wait to read the Sequel.
Author's Response: Thanks
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{reviewid: 1287992, reviewer: 'hermy4girl'}
31st January 2007:
wow that was sad but keep writing your cool
Author's Response: thanks
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{reviewid: 1232440, reviewer: 'aOwl'}
18th December 2006:
Aaw.. so sad. And Ron, aaargh, open your eyes man! She likes you!
heehee... Love this fic, though =D
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you like it!
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{reviewid: 1208774, reviewer: 'hpstephanie'}
26th November 2006:
That was so good..sniff sniff
Author's Response: Thanks
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{reviewid: 1182284, reviewer: 'naomi'}
2nd November 2006:
that was the happiest and the sadest thing i have eva read
in a good way though
(weep,weep)
Author's Response: Thanks
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{reviewid: 1114032, reviewer: 'HermyLuvsRon'}
22nd August 2006:
You have Ginny playing chaser and seeker in the same game. Pretty good otherwise.
Author's Response: i probaby wrote the wrong thing one time... thanks
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{reviewid: 1111442, reviewer: 'PhoenixxFlight'}
20th August 2006:
Hmmm.
Would you mind honesty?
I liked it, but it moved way to quickly for my liking.
You also have alot of trouble with description, spelling, punctuation, ext.
Alot of this didn't seem real to me, and don't really see much of this happening in book seven.
Nevertheless, I know you must have tried very hard, and put so much effort into this, and for that I admire you. I would never be able to finish a story this long because I would get bored.
I'm not going to say it was bad, because it definetly wasn't.
And obviously many people loved it by the sound of some fo your reviews. Let's just say it wasn't the kind of story I enjoy.
You should try some one shots, you would probally be very good at them. Just work on describing a bit more, and giving the characters more indepth thoughts.
It was very cute though, I must admit.
Please don't be angry with my honesty, I just like to be honest. I think tis the best way to help people learn and grow as writers.
muchlove,
Jenna
Author's Response: Thanks for the honesty. I don't mind at all. I actually want to go back and revamp the whole story and make it better, but I just havn't gotten to it. I'm sorry it wasn't your favorite. I do actually have a lot of one shots if you're interested. This is my only finished long-fic.
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{reviewid: 1068472, reviewer: 'unknown'}
19th July 2006:
it ws a truly beautiful, the ending was incredibly emotional
Author's Response: thanks
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{reviewid: 1061309, reviewer: 'Sudha53'}
13th July 2006:
this definitely got my intrest. i thought the conversation was started so Hermione would spill to Ron right there, and I'm really glad she didn't! I like the way it's going right now, and I'm going to read the next chapter!!!
Sudha
Author's Response: Hope you like it :) There's a sequel started if you do, but I dunno when I'm going to get to finishing it
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{reviewid: 1020907, reviewer: 'sarah'}
12th June 2006:
i realy love this story normily i get bord with long storys but this one kept me on the edge of my seat ending was so sad. many aspectes of this story i belive will proble happen in the 7th book cant wait to read the seqwel
Author's Response: Thanks
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{reviewid: 1013046, reviewer: 'Stefanie'}
6th June 2006:
I just wanted to say that I loved the line from Rent. :)
Author's Response: thanks :)
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{reviewid: 1010644, reviewer: 'Rukus'}
4th June 2006:
Wow. This was probably one of the best stories i have read on this site. I think the ideas and theories you had for harry and the horcruxes is what will happen in the 7th book. There is only one thing that maybe could be changed; the title. I am not really sure how that fits with the book. Because if 7 years of friendship can pass any test than why couldn't it save harry? maybe try the title the boy who lived, loved, died. or something?
Author's Response: hmm... that's a good point
I'll think about it :)
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{reviewid: 1006975, reviewer: 'rotter'}
31st May 2006:
I loved it, it was so sad at the end. What will the sequel be called?
Author's Response: ron weasley and the pure blood prat
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{reviewid: 994450, reviewer: 'Amanda'}
21st May 2006:
I really liked this story, besides just having Ron/Hermione, you also had Harry/Ginny, and i really enjoyed it, this was like a preview of the Seventh Book for me, i really enjoyed it, GREAT JOB!!:)
Author's Response: Thanks. It's by far my favorite of my stories. Glad you liked it :)
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{reviewid: 993520, reviewer: 'Brenda16'}
20th May 2006:
Beautifully written, i seriously cried, so wonderfully done, i really enjoyed reading it!!! I do imagine him to die and this was a very well done story. I loved it. Job well done! :) (sniff) [ tear ' ]
Author's Response: glad you liked it :)
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{reviewid: 990399, reviewer: 'Lucawindmover'}
17th May 2006:
That's cute. I'm going on to the next chapter.
Author's Response: glad you like it :)
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{reviewid: 987816, reviewer: 'Brenda16'}
15th May 2006:
Oh how lovely, very sweet. i love that they're going back to school, got to read some more, so far very well done! :) -Brenda
Author's Response: Thanks, so much :)
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{reviewid: 978418, reviewer: 'ron_worshipper'}
5th May 2006:
That was an amazing story and I cried most of the way through the last two chapters, which clearly shows your aptitude as writer. Also, your realisation that Harry was the seventh horcrux is actually something i believe could be possible (although i don't want him to die!). An extremly well deserved well-done and keep it up!!!
A PERFECT 10 RATING FOR THIS!
Rach x0x0x0x
Author's Response: Thanks so much. This is by far my favorite of my stories. It's my baby. I love hearing that other people like it too :)
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