{reviewid: 1972539, reviewer: 'david'}
25th October 2008:
very good i like that they are just as surprised as each other!!!:}
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{reviewid: 1839405, reviewer: 'HPTrioFan5574'}
21st February 2008:
Nice!!!What's Next!?!!
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{reviewid: 1776952, reviewer: 'SNAPEY13'}
3rd January 2008:
Alrighty then! That was ever so startling. I LUV it, man! But why oh why is it only a one-shot? It was totally awsome though.
*SNAPEY13*
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{reviewid: 1467317, reviewer: 'Green_Tissue_Box'}
17th June 2007:
Nice starting. The chapter was short. You didn't have too many editing mistakes.
GTB
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{reviewid: 1354500, reviewer: 'Jess16TX91'}
25th March 2007:
omg! that's awesome! write longer chappies!
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{reviewid: 1342536, reviewer: 'Ultimawand'}
16th March 2007:
This was an awesome story!!! 10/10! Review my story too if you have a chance! GREAT STORY!
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{reviewid: 1331053, reviewer: 'Poohbear19'}
6th March 2007:
Awesome story needs a sequel lol
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{reviewid: 1310007, reviewer: 'darkangel'}
17th February 2007:
nice
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{reviewid: 1255937, reviewer: 'danradcliffesbiggestfan'}
6th January 2007:
LOVE this story, even if its 1 chapter. culd u pleez add more chapters?
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{reviewid: 1242115, reviewer: 'Laugharama_llama'}
26th December 2006:
okay, uhm...I donno...
It seems like very sudden once Draco decided to kiss her. I was like, "Whoa, where'd that come from?"
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{reviewid: 1236461, reviewer: 'lorithehpfanatic'}
21st December 2006:
cool story
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{reviewid: 1216871, reviewer: 'xX_Erased_Picture_Xx'}
4th December 2006:
Aww... will there be a follow up story??
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{reviewid: 1171539, reviewer: 'Rose_4Ever'}
22nd October 2006:
Dang! this should be a short story! It was exellent. I say it should be a short story because it is so good!
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{reviewid: 1093784, reviewer: 'sabbylina'}
6th August 2006:
omg! i love it. make some more please. where did u get these ideas?!
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{reviewid: 1052519, reviewer: 'x_Krystina'}
7th July 2006:
Wow..that was...very fast paced. Haha. But it was very wonderful at the same time...great job!!
~
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{reviewid: 1042892, reviewer: 'Kaykay'}
29th June 2006:
I really loved this story. It's great.
xxxKayleighxxx
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{reviewid: 1016803, reviewer: 'Harrypotterlover5654'}
9th June 2006:
Poor Draco!
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{reviewid: 1011538, reviewer: 'GINNYPOTTER18'}
4th June 2006:
awwww its so sweet....i always wished a guy would say I love you. with a straight face instead of you're hot with a straight face
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{reviewid: 978701, reviewer: 'dracomalfoylover92494'}
6th May 2006:
this was retarded
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{reviewid: 911846, reviewer: 'XITrinityBladeIX'}
22nd February 2006:
omg...i feel really bad....it makes me sad...lol you're probably think 'this kid is crazy....', but i hate to see love stories fail...:(
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{reviewid: 888086, reviewer: 'midnight_me'}
3rd February 2006:
Hmm. I don't know. Everyone seems out of character in this. I doubt Ron would be teasing himself like that. Saying how he almost wet himself over spiders. I just don't see him doing that.
Plus, none of the characters call Hermione, 'Mione'. Please don't use those pet names, because a lot of people find that annoying and ooc.
Draco was also very ooc. He wouldn't just admit he loved Hermione like that, even if he did love her. He actually reminded me of James in this story. Draco is a lot meaner than James.
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{reviewid: 863733, reviewer: 'BritishPrincess'}
18th January 2006:
This is good. I'm gonna read the sequel right away. Really good!
Author's Response: glad you like it!
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{reviewid: 798417, reviewer: 'Blonde_Gal'}
5th December 2005:
That is beuatiful *cries*
Author's Response: ;) thanks
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{reviewid: 780107, reviewer: 'Alex'}
22nd November 2005:
damn, but hey. I would have probably done the same thing. But regretfull
Author's Response: Lol :-)
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{reviewid: 778452, reviewer: 'lunadragonfly'}
21st November 2005:
liked it, it was good!!!!!!!!!!!! :-D
Author's Response: Thanks! :-)
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