Well... I can't say I like the story line. I don't know how you can twist this... Maybe Voldemort is posessing Dumbledore behind the vale? Ohhh... I cried. Report Review
Great Job!! Some of the facts are slightly off, but it is really good. I think Remus will do one of his secretive smiles when he sees Hermione's animagus. Their bonding between top student and teacher will strengthen, and he might even give her private coaching in somthing?? As for Ginny, I don't know if she will TELL Harry, but maybe Harry walk in on her crying about debating whether or not to tell her?? They're some ideas for your fanfiction, if I wrote it, like Hermione, it would be yards long, it would become a novel. You keep it to the point and interesting, and you don't add too much extra information. Congratulations!! Report Review
This is a very interesting story! I hope you decide to post more soon :) Report Review
That was so awesome!!! It was about the hes thing I have ever read in my life. Except for maybe the actual books but other than that it was the very best. I'm upset that dumbledore betrayed lily and James but I can already tell that the story is going to be amazing. I love the plot twist Report Review
Amazing! Report Review
Are you going to continue this story??? It is very very good!
Please continue it? lolAuthor's Response: Thanks! I probably will finish it...Sorry I sort of abandoned it. Report Review
HOW COULD YOU! ARG!!! I am not Reading the next chapter! (mainly because it is not posted yet. ) Ok, I will read the next chapter, But still. How could you? Lily and James, Lynx. *sob*Author's Response: i know...but that was my plot twist...and in my mind, I thought it was logical. I'm going to try to get back into writing for HPFF...so hopefully I'll have Chapter 17 out soon Report Review
I do not like Harry as an Eagle. No, scratch that, I do not understand why you picked that. Explain.Author's Response: He loves flying so much, and his normal life can't really include Quidditch...and now...he can fly. Ok, that's not the real true reason. Harry has never really been free: he has the Dursleys and then this whole responsibility to kill Voldemort. He's never really free to do what he wants, and flying is very freeing Report Review
I don't believe it! I think that You put that in there to thicken the plot and someone else wrote that letter. But If Dumbledore did write those letters, It makes no sense. None. I do not think that Dumbledore Would risk 2 lives (or three, things could have turned out differently) for this. Maybe He would have done it when he was a teenager, but not know. It does not fit his Personality. (LIKE Hermione and Remus. It fits neither of their Personality's.)Author's Response: Actually, it does fit Dumbledore's personality, in my opinion. I mean, he was willing to let Harry die to get rid of Voldemort. Report Review
Boy, Is everyone Oblivious (except Remus.) I love them. Sigh. Hey, What will happen When Hermione goes back to the Future (Movie) and Sees Remus? And What about Tonks? This is Not Hermione Behavior.Author's Response: it will certainly be interesting, that's for sure. And I'm sure Hermione will come to her senses soon! Report Review
OK! you admitted it! AGE PROBLEM! He has a Problem with dating people younger than him! So why is he OK with Dating Hermione? ( I like Hr/R, And I have a problem with Remus Dating Hermione. Remus is just not like that. SO I will keep tying to prove my point. ) I still think it is FabulousAuthor's Response: lol thanks! And again...I have NO idea what I was thinking whilst writing this. But trust me: Hr/Remus won't continue throughout the entire story Report Review
I do not like Harry, Ron nor Hermione as Animagus. I just don't like it. But it is cool, and this is not my story, so... Phooey.Author's Response: I know *headdesk* I just reread this...it's soooooo cliche Report Review
Well, You do know that useing magic on a muggle (even one that knows about magic) Is illegal, so Sirius should not do anything magical to him because then he would get thrown back into Azkaban. Not what wants, I'm sure.Author's Response: yeahhhh i know. But it's Sirius...and he loses his temper easily lol Report Review
Hey, Why is Remus still dating Hermione, even after he found out he is what, 2o something years older than her? He is not like that. And why is Hermione dating him, When she knows he is 20 something years older than her and with Tonks?Author's Response: i... have no idea. Honestly, this is the one aspect of the story i'm not proud of. I'm just not a great romance writer. Report Review
My favorite character? Hmm... In Harry potter or your story?Author's Response: haha in HP Report Review
Ok. No offence, But I am a little disapointed with this chapter. From you previouse chapters, I expected more of an omphy (only word I could think of) way of Them finding out. Otherwise, It was good.Author's Response: lolll yeah, i know what you mean, but i figured this was pretty much the "information-giving" chapter. Report Review
I don't understand. Did he leave out the part about Remus being a Werewolf?Author's Response: oh haha no... Catherine knows he's a werewolf... she found out when Slughorn was talking about giving Remus the potion Report Review
I Like Peter good. So He made some mistakes later on. People change. Why can't he be a good friend when he was younger? I'm glad Sirius Values Friendship over Girls. (At least, I think he is breaking up with her) this is really good. I love it.Author's Response: yep...he's definitely breaking up with her. And yeah, I figured that if James and Lily were willing to make him the Secret Keeper, then Peter should have been good back then. Report Review
I loved that. It was funny! Lol. LOLOLO. Hahaha. Can't.stop. laughing. Lol.Author's Response: haha thanks! I rather enjoyed writing that chapter myself Report Review
Ok. Three people like Hermione? What happend to her Frilly hair and know it all attitude?Author's Response: yeah *sighs* I have no idea. Ok, I wasn't the best writer back then...and I'm realizing that this plot has sooo many issues Report Review
Thank you. I didn't like Sirius dead, but could think of no way for him to be alive. Getting captured by Voldy is a great way. You are a really good writer. I love the small jokes you put in. :) This is great. Keep it up!Author's Response: awwww thanks! lol yeah, I loooved writing that Sirius was alive again Report Review
Thank you! someone else thinks Ernie whats-his-name should be head boy. He is the 2nd smartest and most annoying ( he gets 1rst place) In that year. Also, I thin that, Harry would be the leader, Hermione would be the smart clever one, and Ron would be the annoying one (you need to have one of those) Who sometimes thinks outside the box. And has a huge ego. I love it! It is awesomw and I can't wait to read the rest!Author's Response: yay!!! I'm so glad you liked it! And yeah lol...I thought Ernie should've been the pick from the beginning Report Review
Alright! You responded to all your reviews! That's a good sign! Does this mean you'll have time to update soon? *looks at you hopefully*Author's Response: It does mean I'll have time to update soon, yes. *writes furiously* Report Review
this was a great story and i love whats happening with harry and his parents.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you like it! Report Review
Blimey, intense chapter. I have to say it was really well written and I like the flow to the story as well. It seems I have finally caught up and now it is time to demand another chapter. This is truly breathtaking and I am eager to find out the conclusion to this!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try to get another chapter up soon!
Maybe I'll have writing time tomorrow... Report Review
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