{reviewid: 2460103, reviewer: 'JilyRonks'}
5th January 2011:
I love this story , it's so sweet :)
JilyRonks x
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{reviewid: 2005935, reviewer: 'Jameslovelily'}
9th December 2008:
hey well good job on the story but i think you should continue the story.
its really good and it have me the shivers at the end. The red eyes staring at them wooo scary... To know about me i am obessed with james/lily stories i love them so much and they are all on my favorite list sooo i really love your story!!! GOOD JOB but i would really like it if u contine with the story.! :D
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{reviewid: 1946006, reviewer: 'cabby%20JRB'}
8th June 2008:
I think this story would be perfect if you made it longer. I t shouldn't be one-shot. You should make another version with at least 2 or 3 more chapters, in my opinion.
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{reviewid: 1753882, reviewer: 'lilynjames4ever92'}
15th December 2007:
great story although dont you think 13 is a bit young maybe 16 or 17 would have made it more romantic
but hey it's your story
keep writing!
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{reviewid: 1679347, reviewer: 'asldke'}
21st October 2007:
you should write more
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{reviewid: 1587276, reviewer: 'asdfasdfa'}
20th August 2007:
wtf ? red slitted eyes? did i miss something? i feel dumb. who was the "red slitted eyes"
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{reviewid: 1459185, reviewer: 'i%20luv%20harry%20x3'}
12th June 2007:
Awww! This is adorable! Ican't believe it'd only one chappie. Good job.
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{reviewid: 1423183, reviewer: 'GRWAP_WANT_STORY'}
19th May 2007:
ok, i know this is gonna sound stupid, but how do you favorite this? Help!
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{reviewid: 1423178, reviewer: 'GRAWP_WANT_STORY'}
19th May 2007:
that was sweet and funny. especially the part about he cheeseburger. the red eyes confused me, what were they doing so early in james and lilys lives?
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{reviewid: 1410960, reviewer: 'Divine_Till_Night'}
8th May 2007:
Uh oh! Bad snakey akey!!! Sry, had to say that! You r terrific! I don't like sarah just so u know. She thinks too much of herself!
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{reviewid: 1176778, reviewer: 'lankeylegs'}
27th October 2006:
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww! bravo!
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{reviewid: 914146, reviewer: 'Kudo'}
23rd February 2006:
Very OOC, Lily and James were nothing like they "really" are, but I guess you weren't aming for a canon story so much? Other than that it was very adorable, the red eyes confuse me, but it's a nice way to end it, because its so different to the rest of the story. And i think it's really good that you have your grammar etc. right. Nice job, shall read your other stuff in search for more cuteness!
Author's Response: yeah, this story was written way before OotP came out, so that explains how not like Lily and James they are... I should prolly make an Author's Note of that in the first chapter or something, huh? ;)
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{reviewid: 842071, reviewer: 'mmm_bacon'}
5th January 2006:
this was really good, that sarah person though, i just wanted to slap her! the ending with the eyes really brought canon canon into the the originality, keep writing!
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{reviewid: 674680, reviewer: 'Vampire_Penguin'}
30th August 2005:
Ohmygosh! That was so good! so SO SO SO good!!!!
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{reviewid: 593295, reviewer: 'liliana1122'}
13th July 2005:
oh wow!!! that was a great story!!! really really great and i really hope u continue with it!!!! cant wait, ill look forward to it!!!
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{reviewid: 306962, reviewer: 'BlackMoon741'}
25th December 2004:
Aww! I love it! Excellent fic!
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{reviewid: 210029, reviewer: 'VanessaTJ'}
6th August 2004:
its very good!! plz update soon!!
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{reviewid: 86263, reviewer: 'Faithful'}
15th December 2003:
Thats a great fic...pity its completed. Besides that i love the way you write, its different (sumhow) to most fanfics
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{reviewid: 57530, reviewer: 'liz'}
31st July 2003:
pleeeeeeeeeeease keep posting I love the storu so far
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{reviewid: 48747, reviewer: 'hermharry'}
4th July 2003:
ooo this is awesome! keep going!
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{reviewid: 46168, reviewer: 'SilverMirror'}
15th June 2003:
I don\'t usually read Lilly/James stuff, but since you reviwed my songfic I firured I\'d review yours. (Thank you so much BTW). Anyway, I thought it was very, very sweet and cute! Well done! :)
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{reviewid: 44457, reviewer: 'sarahriverhill'}
3rd June 2003:
OOH!!!!!!! Keep going!
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{reviewid: 44483, reviewer: 'Emlyn'}
3rd June 2003:
Hey guys, this is the author! Thanks for your reviews, I lurv you all! I don\'t think I\'m going to write much for what happens directly after \"First Kiss\", not soon anyway, but I\'m working on a new story that chronicles what happens during Lily and James\' 7th year, after they graduate, when the get married... etc. Please read that, it\'s called \"Lily and James: Star Cross\'d\", or something of that nature. ::grinage:: thank you! Love, Emlyn
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{reviewid: 44526, reviewer: 'karen%20potter'}
3rd June 2003:
I rilly like this story, its cool!!
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{reviewid: 44381, reviewer: 'Stevoe'}
2nd June 2003:
That was so sweet! Except for the eyes, that was kind of sad, because of what happens to them. Your a great writer! Is this a one part fic or should I keep looking out for it?
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