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6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by griffindor_girl

10th November 2005:

thats really good your a pretty good auther and please UPDATE SOOOONNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Author's Response: thank you so much!

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Review #2, by Cheesopotter

The Red Headed Boy

5th November 2005:

DAng it megs u made me cry again...lol great story that poor poor girl

Author's Response: hehe sorry. but thanks!

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Review #3, by cheesopotter

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1st November 2005:

PLEASE UPDATE SOON...i sound like you....lol..anyway i wanted to tell you i put the 8th chappie in the thing and it is awaiting

Author's Response: lol I'm trying, and thanks!

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Review #4, by cheesopotter

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26th October 2005:

I love it....I like love all your storys lol...it is good...but I don't know how to pronounce her name?? lol IT WAS GREAT ONCE AGIAN I LOVED IT IT WAS BLOODY BRILLIENT!!!!!!!!!1

Author's Response: Thanks hon!

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Review #5, by sauerkraut_poet

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17th October 2005:

It's a pretty good start, but very short, even for a prologue. Perhaps you could describe her appearance more, and give more reasons why she didn't fit in at the two Canadian schools? Also, it would be a good idea to double-check your spelling, punctuation, and grammar - I noticed a few mistakes, mostly in the first paragraph.

Author's Response: Thanks again! This was written when I was 12, I'm reposting it but I plan on going back and rewriting parts to make it more complete than it was before. Thanks again, megs

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Review #6, by Mobeanz

Introduction

8th October 2005:

good but u need more description

Author's Response: thanks, it was written when I was 12

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