i feel so bad 4 harry. having to act like james seems kinda hard...good chapter!Author's Response: I know - thank you for reviewing :D Report Review
what does it do? good job so far...Author's Response: thank you :) Report Review
The story was nice! Please write more!Author's Response: Thank you for review - I will try, but I'm taking a break from that particular story right now. lol Report Review
Really good story so far-please update soon! And please don't try to make this a Harry/Hermione thing.Author's Response: I hope I'll get time to update. In that case, I will probably change the story somewhat...
:) Thank you for your lovely comment! Report Review
lollollollollollollollollollollollollollol XD who!
harry's love life is a mess, just like mine lol XDXDXDXDXDXDXD
l8erAuthor's Response: thank you for reading and reviewing my chapters. l8er ;) Report Review
Wha??? *sniff sniff*
Well off to the next chappie!
*Jumps up and down towards the next chapter*Author's Response: ... Report Review
Do i like it? I LOVE IT!
l8er off to the next chappie!Author's Response: thank you! Report Review
lol lol lol lol lol lol that was so funny! l8erAuthor's Response: thanks :D Report Review
im going to read the next one looks intressing!!!!!!!Author's Response: thanks for reviewing! :D Report Review
Well, Sweden...I promised you a review, so here it is. I'll start with the bad parts so I can finish with the good ones. First: your chapters are kinda short, you should make them longer (I do however appreciate the fact that you CAN write short chapters. I had to split all my chapters in halves, sometimes even thirds, because they were too big!). Second, more detail into the story would help a lot. There are also a few gramatical mistakes, but not really important. There is however, a small confusion in this very chapter. You see, there's this one point where you wrote (about James) "What pissed him off even more was that he hadn’t even found out anything about this Harry Potter." If he knew Harry's last name was Potter, it must have struck a nerve, right? I mean, you didn't explain anything about whether or not James knows he is related to Harry. Right, so the criticism is over. he good parts. I should obviously start with the plot, because it's brilliant! James switching with Harry-awsome! I loved the part where James thinks Hermione is his (well, Harry's, actually) girlfriend and he just goes and kisses her. It's so...James-like. I love James-like things. And then there's thepointless walk. That was so funny! Like, just the simple idea of walking aimlessly around in circles makes you laugh at the stupidity of the situation. I loved the Marauders, Sirius especially. Now, I'm confused about one thing. In this chapter, Remus asked who is the guy that's in Sirius's body. That really raised question marks above my head. What's that supposed to mean? And then you said "Sorry, but I would have to delete the next minutes of this scene, I am afraid that It would be too much to take for younger readers." - like, why did you say that? And what was in there that I was supposed to figure out? By the way, I'm not a young reader (well, I don't know, you may be older than me), so...maybe there's a possibility I could find out about the whole thing? Anyway, all in all, the story was good, I especially loved the plot. Just remember, longer chapters would improve the story. Update soon, okay? Lots of love, CJ. Author's Response: Thank you CJ_Black, for your review. First of all, I can understand your confusions - I know the detailess parts are hard to understand and I'm planning to do most of this story over to do it longer, more detailed and last but not leat: more understandable. When? I do not know. My Exams are coming up and I have big problems keeping up and theres no time for my stories. I will try, can not promise cause that could be fatal, to update as the summer comes along.
You are absolutely right about that sentence, and I will change it, I really didn't notice at all! I have problems writing these story because I'm not from an english speaking country, and I am NOT the best in class, to put it that way. I do have a lot of ideas, and it's hard putting it on paper... Thank you SO MUCH FOR THE REVIEW I simply love to have longer ones so I can improve myself. :) Report Review
AHHHH! I absolutely looove it!!!! It is sooo great!
Please please oh please update soon
Love from DrueAuthor's Response: Hey. It is good to know that someone likes the story, so thank you! I have troubles with updating any story right now, but I'l let you know when on "personal info" ... Thanks for the review! :) Report Review
Hey, der er ikke flere kapitler O_O! Nej!!!! Skriv mer !!(syntes jeg har hørt det før!) Author's Response: Nei, det var visst ikke flere nå.. :) Jeg syns også jeg har hørt det der før... *ler* Takk for all compliment!!! I will update, but that might take a little while (skolearbeid sjønner'u...) :) Report Review
Virkeligt et godt kapitel! ^__~ jeg læser bare videre!Author's Response: Gjør det du. :) Report Review
HAH! Nej, hvad sker der for James? HAH, det er rigtig sjovt, jeg kan ikke vente med at læse næste kapitel ^__^Author's Response: Hæ? Ja, ja : takk for reviewen!!! Report Review
Great! Det var virkeligt fedt at læse det fra James' vinkel ^__^ lol, glæder mig til at læse videre, det bliver bare bedre og bedre!!Author's Response: Bedre å bedre? Jøss, du vet hvordan du skal gjøre en i bedre humør uten å skrive masse... :) Report Review
Omg, det var et fantastisk kapitel! Det var så sjovt ^__^Author's Response: Syns du det?? Thanks! Report Review
Great chapter! Det er SÅ godt det her! Vildt god idé med alt det med at de bytter krop! Jeg læser bare videre ^__^!Author's Response: Tusen takk skal du ha! Report Review
Omg, I loved it! Det var virkeligt godt! glæder mig til at læse videre ^__~ Author's Response: THANKS!!!! takk takk!!!! :) Report Review
Hey, this is a good story! Update soon! haylie_lupin!!Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you think so! I'll try to update as fast as I can. Cheers! ;) Report Review
i like the story keep on writing. Author's Response: I will! Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
i loved it! very very good... =D i liked it sooo much!! keep updating =DAuthor's Response: Thanks! I'll try to update, but I have been very busy for a long time now, so I havn't been able to... But thank you for your review!!!! :) Report Review
Nice banner. "It was to complicate for him to handle." I think you mean "It was too complicated for him to handle. Man, I really got to learn to lay off the grammar errors. Awe I want to read the little M rated bit! Nuts! Oh, and "tuff" here is "tough", Remus in privet [private], "Well, I am not who you think I Am [am]," and "He didn't know how to handle been [being] nice to Peter. Also, "practising [practicing] to [for] this stupid competition, witch [which]" I am terrible! Well, I do sincerely hope you update soon. Author's Response: No! You are not terrible! I think it is GREAT to get so much help from my reviewers, I am very sorry for all the mistakes... I'll try to fix them as soon as I can! Thank you for your help!!! :) :) :) Report Review
this story is really good! i love storys that people switch places. the only part i didnt like was when james thought that hermionie was his girlfreind. that was a bit to weird. otherwise this story is awseome. update!Author's Response: Cool that you thought my story was ok! It ok if you didn't think of the James/Hermione part. Not everyone can like it, i guess.... :) Report Review
nice story!Author's Response: You think so? Nice to hear!!! (Ok, nice to READ...) :) Report Review
heyy! please update!Author's Response: He, He, He!
Thank you! And I will update! Soon!
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