Good start, love to read it and then ... the change was too fast for me to follow, I couldn't get her point.Author's Response: I've been meaning to edit this story, I've never actually liked the pacing in it. However life hasn't let me even think about fanfics, let alone edit them, so unfortunately this won't be edited for quite a while. I'm glad that you liked the start however! Thanks for the review! =) Report Review
Hm, it was ok. Very funny though.Author's Response: awe, thanks for the review!Author's Response: awe, thanks for the review! Report Review
YAY FOR STEPH! I liked how you worked the spork and alarm clock into it. Admit it, you love my suggestions. I AM YOUR INSPIRATION! Er, well, I try to be anyways. Yay for you and your pro-ness at writing!Author's Response: YAY FOR ALI! the spork was the easiest to work in, alarm clock the hardest, but i did it! of course i love your suggestions! you are my inspiration sometimes! yay for you liking it! yay yay yay!! Report Review
it seemed to end a bit suddenly but it was goodAuthor's Response: yes, the ending needs work, i'll admit it. but it was giving me too much greif. but i'm glad you liked it! thanks for the review! Report Review
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