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Review #1, by bexi_potter The first meeting

8th November 2005:
aww dani! hoo sweet! i like it. (btw this is becki, tara's mate.) just adding, cos i didn't kno if u knew who i was! u gonna update soon? from becki

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Review #2, by bexi_potter The first meeting

16th October 2005:
um...hi dani! its becki! sup? n e who, um, v. random story. its all so random. randomrandomrandom. lol bex xxx

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Review #3, by Raslygri The first meeting

9th October 2005:
Nice characterizations! I enjoyed reading this and although I know that it can be quite difficult, you pulled off second person quite well. However, it would be a bit easier to read if you considered using the more accepted format of having returns between paragraphs. :)

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Review #4, by Blinking_Emeralds The first meeting

7th October 2005:
yay but verry verry straitforword

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