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Review #1, by Raslygri The first meeting

9th October 2005:
Nice characterizations! I enjoyed reading this and although I know that it can be quite difficult, you pulled off second person quite well. However, it would be a bit easier to read if you considered using the more accepted format of having returns between paragraphs. :)

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Review #2, by Blinking_Emeralds The first meeting

7th October 2005:
yay but verry verry straitforword

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