Reading Reviews for Harry Potter and the unforseen
  
5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Zandie The Beginning

14th November 2005:
thanks for the review...

 Report Review

Review #2, by Ruth The Beginning

7th November 2005:
It seems okay so far: but perhaps a little paragraph spacing would make it a little easier on the eyes. And I think you mean prefect, not 'prefix'! But apart from that, it's really good, especially for a newbie. :)

Author's Response: thanx...

 Report Review

Review #3, by Starfire Potter24 Hermione's point of view

15th October 2005:
I love your story! I'm a bit surprised that Hermione went gothic, though. Wonderful story!

Author's Response: i know i havent seen anyone else make her gothic yet so i figured i'd give it a try....i think it worked well though.

 Report Review

Review #4, by Starfire Potter24 The Beginning

15th October 2005:
Why is Hermione upset? I love your story so far!

Author's Response: um well you have to wait and see and i'm working on chapter 3 right now! thankz for reading!

 Report Review

Review #5, by DB2020 The Beginning

8th October 2005:
Hmm... it's different than most of what I've read out there. I'm interested to see where this is going. A few tweeks here and there, and everything would be fine. I think its rather amusing for the Vernon to actually accept the Grangers. Yay for trips to the States! You have potential, keep it up ^_^

Author's Response: Thankz bunches i really appericate it i'll update soon i promise!

 Report Review
If this is your story and you wish to respond to reviews, please login