I liked this fic a lot but I'm going to rate it 9/10 because of some spelling mistakes and the fact that you kept switching between third and second person. Without those it would be perfect. Great job.

Author's Response: hehe, to tell the truth, I had no idea what a beta even was when I wrote this :P and I wrote it on a bus, teehee. But thanks for liking the story ^_^

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Aww I love it!!! Great job bringing all the feelings and emotions to life. Did you ever post the prequel?

Author's Response: aww, thanks :) And as far as I can remember, no >_< if I ever have time though, I"ll try and write one :)

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[sniff] I thought it was great, very deep, I always loved Evanesence, she has this pain, or sorrow putinto her music, and ur spelling was alright, I thought you wrote it wonderfully, it all looked beautiful, I felt tears coming near the end, when it all sunk in. [sniff] {sigh} thank-you, it was wonderful, I needed somewthing nice to read before bed. ^_- SQ

Author's Response: aww, thanks :) me too, the music is just amazing and it fit so well I had to do. though I actually wrote it on a bus ride to a volleyball game last year :) it was funny, hehe. and I'm glad it worked.

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I loved that. I love that song too. Good job.

Author's Response: yay! Thank you :)

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Yet again, this was really, really good. I keep on saying that, it's almost becoming annoying. :) Anyways, keep up the good work!

Author's Response: haha. I hate when that starts to happen. its like...I need new words...hrmmmmmmmm. but yeah. thank you ^_^

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Aw. How sad.

Author's Response: yeah, its deffinitly very depressing :(

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You know, you have lots of wrong lyrics?

Author's Response: I got them from a site, and I really don't care. If you can't say something nice, just shut up...

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I love that song so even if the story sucked it would automatically rule, but since your story doesn't suck at all, not even a little bit, it is a bonus.

Author's Response: yay! It doesn't suck even a little bit!! I feel so happy now. And I'm glad you liked it. I started writing on a volleyball trip...that was interesting

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Awesome banner

Author's Response: thanks goes to nini....

Author's Response: edit* it was done by potterholic_22....wrong story...hehehe. I don't remember her new name ont he new site

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That was very sad but it made me smile at the end so it's okay!

Author's Response: yay! I'm glad you liked it

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reallllly nice fic.. :) and i love this song!!!

Author's Response: thanks. I do too

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ohh I like it!!!

Author's Response: I 'm glad you do :)

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that was awsome really sad though but that made it better

Author's Response: it did? Sad things always make it worse for me...but I still read them

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thank u i've been wating for a songfic with the song My Immortal forever

Author's Response: lol, I just felt like writing one. I've never written a songfic in my life before either

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That was awesome. I loved it but if you know the song the lyrics get kind of annoying but don't change that. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: thank you :) and I didn't ahve internet access at the time..so I had to do one taht I knew the words too and that fit

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So Sad CRYCRYCRYCRYCRYCRYCRYCRYCRYCRYCRYCRYCRYCRYCRYCRYCRYCRYCRYCRYCRYCRYCRYCRYCYTCYRCYRCYCYCYCRYCRY

Author's Response: I guess that means you like it? I hope you'll check back for my next one-shot :)

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