I really like the idea that harry just wants to give voldy what he wants and save the others the trouble of protecting him. I like where i think this story is heading...can't wait to read more!Author's Response: Thanx for the lovely review. I hope to get back to the next chapter as soon as I can. Thanx again Report Review
ooh! i like your story! great Harry angst! keep writing!!!Author's Response: Thank you so much for your lovely review. I will endevour to get back to this story as soon as I can as I am also in the middle of two other stories. I wasn't sure that this story was liked with so little reviews but I will definately continue with it now. ThanxAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for your lovely review. I will endevour to get back to this story as soon as I can as I am also in the middle of two other stories. I wasn't sure that this story was liked with so little reviews but I will definately continue with it now. Thanx Report Review
Okay I'm reviewing. Very good, I liked it allot, but you haven't mentioned much of Dumbledore, just Sirius really. I think that it's true Harry would feel really sad about staying at Number 12, but I think he would have felt about the same way he did in HBP; knowing Sirius didn't want him to stop living. I think Harry would feel that Dumbledore would feel the same way as well. Ah well, that's just me. :-) Good job and keep writing! Author's Response: I really appreciate your response - thank you.
As the chapters progress, we will see further into Harry's feelings involving both Dumbledore and Sirius, but at the moment - his thoughts are more towards Sirius as that was the only real family he knew.
Thank you so much for your review and hopefully I'll hear more from you should you decide to keep reading when other chapters are up!! Report Review
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