wow...you should continue this story...I love it

Author's Response: I'd thought about it for a while, promising the possiblity of this in many previous responses but I don't think this will happen without great motivation as life has interrupted my time for writing. If anything, I'd like to rework some of my L/J fics. Thanks for the kind review :)

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nice, it was mild horror, mixed with adventure and mystery and thats the combination I like, oh please do write more such stories!

Author's Response: I belive this was a one-off thing, but perhaps I'll try my hand at some more, thanks for the review, i'm glad you liked it.

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good little story but i do agree that it should be a little chp. type story to tie up the lose ends.

Author's Response: I'll seriously consider doing so if my schedule clears up :) Thanks for the review!

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I think this was a good story although I do agree with you to make it a bit longer. Angie being a witch was actually surprising.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, and were surprised. perhaps i should have added more clues as to her identity?

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Well, it was interesting, I'll grant you that. Who was the voice, though? By the way, I think you spelled Shakespeare wrong. :)

But overall, this was WAY better than my first fic, How to Save a Life, in my opinion. Off to another fic!

Author's Response: Oh lol I hardly remeber this fic as I said I like wrote it when I was about 8.. Off you go lol.

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hey this is good! i like it... a little confusing thou. and where did Angie come from? it thought it was Mattew, Andrew, Sarah, Jilly and Jennifer.??

Author's Response: Well..Angie's the silent character who doesn't really say much, this was basically her breaking point where she finally speaks out. Thnaks for being honest about being confused and hope I cleared things up for you alittle, thanks for the review!

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The plot-line was really good, but perhaps you could get more into the charecters. There werre five charecters, only three of them actually talked or did something individually, and one was a witch no one knew about. You could do a little bit more with that. Otherwise, it was really good!

Author's Response: Yes, I might make this into a longer fic to explain some of the characters and such, thanx for the review!

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Nice story! Thanks for a good quick read!! (Edit it again, though. Spellchecker missed a few things).

Author's Response: I've now edited it, I found quite a few mistakes that I didn't notice before, your welcome and thanx for the review!

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that was really good but it could have been continued a thousand diffrent ways! you should have just kept going!

Author's Response: hmmm....you've got a point there, when I've finished some of the other one-shot ideas i have maybe I'll go back to that, thajnx for the idea tand thanx for the review:)

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hi jb! great one-shot. really kewl. i love it.

Author's Response: yeah i really liked it too:P thanx for the review!

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lol, a cute, funny one-shot! I loved it!

Author's Response: thanx for reviewing!

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That was good, one question though, does angie go to hogwarts?

Author's Response: yes i believe she does

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good, but would be better if you expanded it.

Author's Response: yes yes i should have, this was just a story i wrote for a class project a few years ago about harry potter sort of and i was just going through a few things and i found it and decided it wuld be fun to put on here, thats why it's not expanded very much, thanx for reviewing!

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