it was great i loved the fact that u thought about fawkes brilliant i hope to read more about that bird good job loving this short story!!

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I liked the chapter. it was pretty good considering I cant write very well myself. Please continue to write if it isnt finished already.

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Love it as usual. Very sweet

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Loveit as usual. Very cute.

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Love it. This one was so sweet. I love how you showed Harrys damaged and sensitive side to Hermione. Try and include more ticklish scenes!

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Very very cute. Love it

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Cute story. However I must poin out that Hermiones parents are muggles and therefor do not have magic. Hermiones mother used a wand to carry Harrys baggage in your story.

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Awe cute!!! Will they get together in this story?

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This is so adorable!

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why so short and harry should have tickled Hermione so much longer in fact harry should have put Hermione's feet in stocks and tied her hands above her head and tickled Hermione everywhere except any where inappropriate until Hermione wet herself and passed out.

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Just saying, Hermione's mom is a muggle, so she wouldn't have a wand. Great story though!

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OMG you HAVE to do more!!

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you suck that story is not compleat. at least make it so we know the story wont end in this

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PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL! I love this story it is so cute!

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OMG! This is such a good story. I really like it. One thing is, you could spend a bit more time finishing it off, like u and spelling mistakes. Apart from that, it's really really good. Well done!

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I have read approximately 200 fan fics, and even with the typos and occasional grammar problems, this is without a doubt the best one that I’ve read; even though it is only half finished. You have introduced sub plots and twists that need to be brought to their conclusion. Please finish it. The only criticism that I might levy is while it might take them a long while to understand that their feelings are actually love, once there they are not so thick as to not see how the other person feels. Their actions and mannerisms changed when they finally realized that it was more than friendship, it was truly love.

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Wonderful story! Please please make a sequel!

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Hey! =) I decided to go back and reread this story- it was actually the first one I ever read on hpff! And it was just as amazing and wonderful the second time through =) Harmony all the way. I just thought I would drop by and let you know how much I loved the story, and that I still remember it *attacks with hug*

Author's Response: thank you so much, it's so awesome to hear that someone likes my story enough to read it twice

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omg luv it baby hahahahahahaha jkout da baby part but i rlly did luv it pure geniuos

Author's Response: lol thank you

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Author's Response: ah thanks again i think lol

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Author's Response: errr, thank you?

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Author's Response: i'm not exactly sure what this says, but thanks

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osm luv it...luv da details

Author's Response: thanks for the review

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I didn't realize it was over until I looked at the end and saw no continuation to the next chapter. I hope you make a sequel. I really did like this one. Just when I was really getting into this, you stop.

Author's Response: i know it was sudden and i'm sorry about that, i'm still considering a sequel but i'm not sure at this point

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It is becoming a habit sleeping together. And when they try to sleep by themselves they aren't able.

Author's Response: indeed it has

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