{reviewid: 1073556, reviewer: 'innosnape'}
23rd July 2006:
Awwwwwwwwww!
Happy ending
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{reviewid: 711442, reviewer: 'Heidi'}
27th September 2005:
BEST STORY EVA!!!
Author's Response: thanks Heidi! You are my BFF!
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{reviewid: 711216, reviewer: 'My_lovin_is_gold'}
27th September 2005:
i think its good but you could have made it a bit longer maybe?
Author's Response: Thanks! I might rewrite it to be longer. But 4 now I will just leave it as it is
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{reviewid: 709952, reviewer: 'V.J.'}
26th September 2005:
hey its nice but i think that it should be i 1 shot thing
Author's Response: I figured out how to change that! It was an accident before! Thanks.
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{reviewid: 709385, reviewer: 'A_Mack'}
26th September 2005:
with this plot it would do better to have it in more than just one chapter. it really does sound like a summary. but it does have good plot and i can hold you that.
i have a friend named Emily Winters, how weird is that?
Author's Response: thanks. That is odd that you have a friend named emily winters!
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{reviewid: 709303, reviewer: 'Kimberly'}
26th September 2005:
It's sweet
Author's Response: Thankies much!
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{reviewid: 709221, reviewer: 'CarlaBlomst'}
25th September 2005:
It was good, but you should try to write in a less "summarizing" manner, if you know what I mean, you have to involve the reader in the story. But good plot=)
Author's Response: Thanks. This was my first fic so I need some pionters! I changed it so that characters were actually in the story.
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{reviewid: 709165, reviewer: 'depressed_sweetie_pie'}
25th September 2005:
aw.. that's so sweet. I love happy endings. they almmost give me hope for my life.
Author's Response: Yes I love happy endings too. That is why I made it not a depressing ending! I don't like ddepressing endings
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