aw that was sweet!

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aww i feel so bad for them both. wicked story. keep writing
xxx

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I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lol
yeah
plz keep writing
15/10
ya....
lol

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This is a pretty good Marauder fic. I usually can only find bad ones, but this is definitley one of the better ones. Nice job :)

Author's Response: why thank you, i really appreciate it!

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oooo..... i lurrrveee it! it rox! i love storys were james gets all sad! keep up da good work!

Author's Response: I have actually just submitted the next chapter to this, so i hope it gets validated soon! and thank you, i'm glad to hear you liked it!!!

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You should of had the others in there still, and then Surius would be like, "see Evans James will do anything for you", and then they would all start laughing, (exept for Lily and James, who would be just glaring at the rest of um', but then smiles would be forming on there facees

Author's Response: hmmm... thats a good idea, i might just have to do something like that, i am actually in the process of re wrtiting this one, so i will have to keep your idea in mind! Thanks!

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i like it! u should def. write more. liz

Author's Response: thanks! Im glad u like it. I might write more... but i have to think of the rest first!

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This is perfect as is.

Author's Response: why thank you!

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a very sweet story about lily and james i enjoyed it very much.

Author's Response: thanks!

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That was great. I liked it alot. Good job. Keep it up.

Author's Response: thanks, i hope to be putting something ew up soon!

Author's Response: *new* not ew

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