That was an interesting piece of writing, but i think that its good. I liked it how you showed Hermione's and Ginny's relationship, and how they can give each other advice.

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It's good, but I do think you should change the yes on "Completed" and add some more.

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That was pretty good. I liked it.

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omg you're going in my favourite authors. i haven't done a challenge yet :) xxx

Author's Response: aww i feel special, lol. :) Thanks for reviewing. that was my first time doing one. i've done more since then for other sites besides this one. :) Thanks for your kind words.

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omg! i love this part "that is why i had to shatter your heart as well as mine" honestly, thats because i feel like someone did that to me and it was horrible.. on a lighter note, i loved your story! keep it up! maybe longer next time and a little more spaced? =]

Author's Response: i know what you mean..and thank you for reviewing and loving my story :)

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I luv it even though it is really sad .

Author's Response: thanks

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-cry-

Author's Response: aww thanks for reviewing. read by your side. it has a better ending.

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well....it certinaly was interesting...it seemed to go a bit fast but I'm so glad you took this on, so there's the thank you. as for the story, I honestly am not sure what to make of it...agian it seemed to go fast so the whole thing went by in like seconds...the plot line was quick. But good job for this being your first time taking on a challenge and I encourage you to continue, Elspeth

Author's Response: i've been told that a few times with the fastness in some of my stuff. i need to take more time with them i know, lol. thanks for reviewing.

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You wrote it well just Ginny can`t be that cruel to Harry . Ginny loves harry and I believe they`ll be together . But you write in a soft way which makes me read to the end . Thanks .

Author's Response: read by your side. better ending and she gets her frustrations out better. :-) Thanks for reviewing

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Oh, sad!! Great job.

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