Its good. An interesting writing style but I thought Draco's eyes were grey not blue but i'm not actually that sure its just something I thought I'd say. Report Review
It didn't make any sense when she said she would get a job in Diagon alley, or Hogsmead, then a few sentences later she said she didn't know what Hogsmead was....? Is there something I am missing? Report Review
Nice story line writing flows well even with the pov shifts. Report Review
ohh, this is nice. I see you've changed it a bit, though. ^_^Author's Response: Thanks, and yes, I have made a few changes. Report Review
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