7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by MuggleBorn Harry Potter and What Life May Bring

1st July 2003:
Uhhhhhhh............... okay....... they just let anyone post ANYTHING on this site huh?

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Review #2, by Kai Harry Potter and What Life May Bring

30th May 2003:
Uhh....well i\'m going to have to agree with \'sorry\'. This has a great plot but honestly, I really don\'t think Harry would just forget about his friends. He\'d be devastated and I know you put in your story that he was sad and all but I really don\'t think he\'d immediatly make a girlfriend and a BEST friend over the first weekend at Snape\'s house. I mean if I lost my two bestest friends...i know i\'d have to move on...but I really don\'t think i\'d make a best friend that quickly and forget that I used to have two friends that i\'ve known ever since I was eleven. But anyway it is still a great story. I\'m not flaming you! It\'s what I call constructive critisism. I wasn\'t too harsh was I? I mean I was just stating a point that\'s it. I really do think the story has an awesome plot and the friendly relationship that Snape and Harry got going is pretty cool too! Please don\'t be too offended by this review. ~*Kai*~

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Review #3, by Anon Harry Potter and What Life May Bring

30th May 2003:
Ever heard of transitions???????????????? And they, the seventh years, would be graduating in 1998.

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Review #4, by Jolene Harry Potter and What Life May Bring

30th May 2003:
I like your story but it needs more suspence and more romance and a little action.Just a few segustgens you don\'t have to do them. P.S.:harry would never forget ron and hermonie! and snape would never be so nice to harry unless there by some chance was a miricale!

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Review #5, by serpensortia Harry Potter and What Life May Bring

29th May 2003:
It is pretty good. I just don\'t like Hermione and Ron being dead. Bring them back somehow and your story will be great. I love the Snape and Harry thing you have going. That is awsome. Keep it. Maybe you should include some Dialogue as well. It couldnt hurt. Plz write more. Dont let any one discourage you from doing so. Thanks for a great start. Oxxxxxx(==Godric Gryffindor==========>

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Review #6, by sorry Harry Potter and What Life May Bring

29th May 2003:
I\'m sorry I have to be harsh, but I do not like it. It starts out suddenly, which is fine, but it carries on suddenly, which is not fine. GRRRRR! But it\'s a good plot though.

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Review #7, by Vella Harry Potter and What Life May Bring

29th May 2003:
Good start. Hope to seen more soon!

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