this is REALLY good.
keep it up.

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Wow!

That was really good.
I liked it.

Nice job.

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that was really good - I wish there were more chapters as I would have loved to read further in this story - but anyways - it was great!

Author's Response: Aw thank you =) I might add more at some point, but for now I'm focusing on Lost Hero and Fall Into Darkness. Thank you very much for your kind words <3

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Really Good!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Aw thank ya muchly <3

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Drunken bar fights are fun! Not that I've ever been in more than a few....One has to wonder why Mr. Lupin called Fenrir a halfbreed though. Good work though.

Author's Response: I'm sure XD Ach he is kinda =P lol thanks muchly <3

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Woah! That was great! Really descriptive! You have a great knack of getting inside your main character, that's realy admirable! Well done!

Author's Response: Aw thank you so much, I'm really glad you liked it! <3

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cant help but hate Johns character. Overly suspicious of ehat others are doing,prejudiced, and ratting out his son when he couldve just as easilylied and said no but good story

Author's Response: Least you're honest lol ;) Thank you. <3

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Amazing! I loved it! Grayback's firstname is spelled Fenrir, but otherwise I can't seem t find ay errors. It's important as a fanfiction writer not to make small irritating mistakes, but you've managed to do it with brilliance. I really like tha angst. Great work! ~ Sam M

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, and thanks very much for pointing that out! Gotta edit that =P <3

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