I think that if you made up a song or something, you should have included it, but if it was very similar to the song in the fifth book (if there was a song in the fifth book), then, you shouldn't. Anyways, Destiny seems like an interesting chapter, and I can't wait to see what she's like. Oh, and also, those surprise trips seem, well, surprising! Can't wait to hear more about them.

Author's Response: thnk u, i thnk i mite take a break frm this story 4 a while cuz i cnt think of anything yet!! (urrggh writers block)! but i think i mite do some one-shots or something to keep my brain working

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Ooh, nice chapter. I can't wait to find out who the girl is!

Author's Response: well the sixth chapter should be up soon so then u can see!

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Aww... Ginny didn't get to tell Harry. Oh well, I still know she likes Harry!

Author's Response: maybe she likes him but does he like her?

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YAY! I'm glad Ron likes Hermione, loved his revelation. Good job.

Author's Response: yeah, because i introduced this so early into the story i thoght i mite hold it off 4 a bit instead of rushing in2 it so if ne off u wonder (when reading my future chapters) "what happened 2 R/HRM?" thts why

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I liked Harry's OWL results. Good chapter, too.

Author's Response: why thnk u :)

Author's Response: why thnk u :)

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I'm glad Harry left the Dursleys. Good job with the first chapter! I'm on to read the next.

Author's Response: thnx, ive found my chapters are really short though i'll have to find ways of lenghtening them! although chapter six is over 2000 words long! so i supose im getting better!

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I like it!!

Author's Response: Thnk u "me" ur the first person 2 reveiw! yay! lol :)

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y duz nobody reveiw?? cum on plz :) i even want 2 hear ur critism!!

Author's Response: well if ur here now i guess you are reveiwing lol

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