7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Destroyerdrt Chapter 1

16th February 2006:
My one comment(spelling?) is the font and spaceing makes it hard to read.Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.

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Review #2, by sara67 Chapter 2

8th October 2005:
very exciting keep writing I like it

Author's Response: Thanks for the review sara67, it is very much appreciated. - Chris

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Review #3, by Hermione_Crookshanks Chapter 2

30th September 2005:
So...you joined Harrypotterfanfiction...or you did...I never knew! Why didn't you tell on the cbox? Anyway, tell me if I should be looking here or the other site for the updates...lol...great work... ~Hermione Crookshanks/Jennifer (in case you didn't figure it out...lol...)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review Jennifer, and yes, updates will be one about six different sites all at once, so enjoy! Thanks again! - - Chris

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Review #4, by jdmindlespcdrone Chapter 2

29th September 2005:
why is chapter 1 repeated as chapter 2 ?

Author's Response: Thank you so much for finding this giant error! It was entirely embarassing on my part, and the problem has been corrected. To everyone, I suggest you reread chapters 1 and 2. I am terribly sorry. - - Chris

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Review #5, by becr Chapter 1

26th September 2005:
wow, interesting finish to the chapter, i cant wait to read what happens next. Keep up the good work

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, there will be updates to the story in future weeks. I hope you enjoy the rest of them. - Chris.

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Review #6, by Campbell de Ballack Chapter 1

23rd September 2005:
Spread it out more so its not one big lump, like put in paragraphs and make it when someones talking they get a new line.

Author's Response: I thank you for your constructive critiscism, yet it is my decision to create my text such as so, and I will stick to it. One thing I always get from readers is this, and I do respect it, though this is not you novel, and my wishes are to keep it the same. Now that I have explained and appreciated your comment, what did you think about the novel thus far? - - Chris

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Review #7, by Kayla Chapter 1

22nd September 2005:
Really awasome u need to continue.

Author's Response: Thanks so much Kayla! It's always good to get feedback from everyone. There are eleven chapters so far of the fifteen that are in this... stop back and continue to check it out. - - Chris.

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