{reviewid: 2232784, reviewer: 'Dracoistroubled'}
7th October 2009:
Oh my GOSH! OMG OMG OMG! AAH!
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{reviewid: 2232782, reviewer: 'Dracoistroubled'}
7th October 2009:
They're married! YaY! I still kinda don't get it... is Nyoko and Draco going to drop the Death Eaters or what?
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{reviewid: 2232736, reviewer: 'Dracoistroubled'}
7th October 2009:
I was tarting to get worried when Snape came... Woderfully written story! I LOOVE it!
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{reviewid: 2232732, reviewer: 'Dracoistroubled'}
7th October 2009:
HOLY EFFING SHIZ!! That is INSANE! AH!
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{reviewid: 2232727, reviewer: 'Dracoistroubled'}
7th October 2009:
wow. just wow. I don't believe it. wow.
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{reviewid: 2232722, reviewer: 'Dracoistroubled'}
7th October 2009:
Poor Harry. It must suck to be him in this chapter.
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{reviewid: 2232718, reviewer: 'Dracoistroubled'}
7th October 2009:
YaY YaY YaY! evil, but YaY!
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{reviewid: 2232701, reviewer: 'Dracoistroubled'}
7th October 2009:
Teeheeheehee! She's looking so evil right now!
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{reviewid: 2232548, reviewer: 'Dracoistroubled'}
7th October 2009:
Sick and twisted. It was PERFECT!
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{reviewid: 1072095, reviewer: 'Lyla'}
22nd July 2006:
iuh
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{reviewid: 757547, reviewer: 'fear%20me101'}
3rd November 2005:
this is more of an angst story than romance. Put it in the Angst category and try to space out your quotes and paragraphs. It's awfully difficult to read. Needs some work.
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{reviewid: 755958, reviewer: 'loser'}
2nd November 2005:
cool
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{reviewid: 752492, reviewer: 'hpluver'}
30th October 2005:
keep writing PLEEZE!!!!!!!!
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{reviewid: 717543, reviewer: 'sanay'}
2nd October 2005:
Good story. I love evil Nyoko
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{reviewid: 708001, reviewer: 'Critic'}
25th September 2005:
Too much like a anime mixed with a horror movie. Your paragraphs are much too long and sould be more divided. Too fast paced.
Author's Response: Anime, i dont see how its anime (if your refering to Nyoko being called that, she isnt chinese/japanese ;P) anyway, thanks for note, always good.
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{reviewid: 707880, reviewer: 'Craig'}
25th September 2005:
Brilliant storie, Feel sorry for the muggle though. But thats good :D !! Awesome storie er lyla O_O
Author's Response: lol craig, many thanks to you. xD
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{reviewid: 707225, reviewer: 'marissa'}
24th September 2005:
this is really good. i think im hooked on it, so please update soon!
Author's Response: lol glad to hear it >:) anywhoo, still working on chap 9 lol
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{reviewid: 704317, reviewer: 'Tazza'}
22nd September 2005:
Loved the beginning! Nyoko seems very evil im loving it!
Author's Response: she isss! lol
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{reviewid: 704239, reviewer: 'icewine'}
22nd September 2005:
ooh...this nyoko girl sounds pretty wicked...nyoko...that's a very japanese-like name...is she really that evil?
Author's Response: ooh shes evil alrite
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{reviewid: 704183, reviewer: 'Kewlcat9126'}
22nd September 2005:
good job! very good! please continue!
Author's Response: lol thanks, more is coming. writing ninth chap now
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