I know you haven't uploaded for a few years but please add more to this book as it is one of my favourite books ! Report Review
one word awesome
no afense but. hurry up ! Report Review
WRITE MORE ITS AWSOME! Report Review
This story is fairly good, ... not the worst I've read by a long shot ...
I really the plot idea that you're executing in this story. Although it's quite a bit patchy, and it seems that nothing can go wrong for the Six of them. (example: they get extraordinary powers, Harry's parents and Sirius come back, Harry/Ginny, Ron/hermione, and Neville/Luna all suddenly fall in love within one chapter) I really like the Soul Mates idea, but I think you're moving a bit too fast with the story in general.
If you slowed down a bit, thoroughly checked for spelling and grammar, and took a little more time to check over your characters, this story could be quite fantastic.
I hope you don't take this as a flame, it's just that I always appreciate constructive crit. in my work and I'm hoping you do too.
Good luck with future chapters,
LilyAuthor's Response: Thank you for your advice, no I didn't take it as a flame. At the moment I'm thinking of just plain out guttering the story and redoing and improving on it. Just not sure how long it'll take me, as I'm so busy with some personal issues right now that I have absolutely no time for anything else.
I hope I can bring the standard of the story up when I do redo it, let me know once I have if it's any better.
Thanks again for your crit.
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this story is fantastic. written so well and I love it Report Review
this story is fantastic. really original. keep up the good work, and please don't end it with the defeat of voldemort, give the reunited families a chance to get to know each other and possibly new family members. goodluck Report Review
PHOENIX'S (are they?) I know its kinda weird to be gettin a rewew on this chapter now but I couldn't help it :)
Great story! Report Review
update soon plz!! I want 2 see more of cho an what she intends 2 do to split harry and ginny up plz!!! I love it 10/10!!! :] Report Review
this is an amazing story and i have had loads of laughs reading it. i hope u update soon. 10/10 Report Review
i was kinda disappointed in the long wait, but i still love your story. can't wait for the next chapter! Report Review
i read the whole story and was disappointed in the way you had harry and dumbledore relationship and even the way they talked back to the teachers and other family members. I think that could have been left out. to me it tool away from the story line. Report Review
just wanted to say I really enjoy this story and hope it gets updated soon. Report Review
I loved it!It was hilarious!It's ok if you have work I mean this chapter was great. So... Just keep up the good work!!! Report Review
i still think your stories absoulutely amazing
best thing ive readAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! I really love knowing that my readers like the stories I write. I should have the next chapter up soon. Sorry it's taking so long, but it keeps getting rejected. It is up right now on Fanfiction.net under the same name, so if you want to read it now, just go on and hit my other account on that site and go for your life. Thank you again. Report Review
out of every single fan fic story this is the best one i have read ever.it excellent, humourus, moving and has a gripping storyline. Please add another chapter soon as i am desperate to find out what happens Report Review
Gr8 chapter! i was a little surprised at aunt Petunia but it was cool! Report Review
Love the story. Wrote one myself with little help of your facts. Hope you don't mind. Please let chapter sixteen come soon.Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the review! I know its been awhile but yeah, been a lil busy. Nice, nah that's kool! I'm gonna read it. It'll be coming soon, unfortunetly each time I try and get it validated, it keeps getting rejected so I have to redo it again. Though it is on Fanfiction.net under the same name if you wanna read it now. Thanks again! Report Review
You HAVE to make a new chapter! I am dying w/o it...This is such a good story! I like the stories where Dumbledore is like an evil, old, manipulator and Harry goes against him
whoa, that cut thing with Harry, that was a lot to take in. I was a bit confused: did Harry do that to himself, or did the Dursley's do that to him? And how did Harry hide the cuts and stuff when the six of them were in the lake?Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for the review. I know it was ages ago but yeah, been busy. About the 'cut' Harry, that was just something he did to fool Dumbledore into thinking things with the Dursleys were way bad. He just used his Metamorph powers to create that look to make it seem more real. Sorry for confusing you! Report Review
oh, this is soo cool! i love the extra powers!! now they are like totally indestructible! yeah! Report Review
ooh, wat is happening to harry that makes him super smart, super magical, and super lovey-dovey, huh? love the story! Report Review
nice chapter Report Review
Amazing Report Review
Please update soon! I want to find out what happens next!!! This is a very good story, I even believed the part about Harry's 'real' look. You are a great writer. Report Review
hey i love your story its one of my favorites but i was just kinda curius as to when you were going to update again
thxs Report Review
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