I am enjoying this one again for the upteenth time. I am hoping that you will hurry and place more chapters out regarding this story. Ilook forward to reading the completed version.

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As I said in a different review I am really looking forward to you finishing and posting the rest of the story. I know life gets in the way but please try. Keep up the marvelous work.

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Just a quick note I love this story I read it once before but I had forgot the title I am glad to see you have not abandoned it. Keep the chapters coming Please.

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are you going to continue writing this story or are you abandoning it

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please update this story soon

Author's Response: hello i am alive everybody sorry for the really really long wait but i am back now so personal issues have keeped me for a long time but i a writing again too let eveyone know i am rewriting it all with new charaters and some cool stuff so stick around have no idea when new chapter will be finised but will try for the next few days lol

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please update the next chapters.....the story is good..

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AHHHHHHHHHH!!! update,update,update,update,update,update!!!!!!

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tell me more sweety or sir

Author's Response: sorry to evey one out there i have not abandoned my story i will finsh but have been really busy things look to be slowing so in the week i should post the next chappy and i have four more on pape just not typed
till then as always open for a chat

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hi! i like ur story. by the way any chance when harry n hermoine will be able to get together??? anywayz can't wawit for the next story

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ARHHHHHHHHHHH UPDATE THE MOTHER FOCKING STORY ALREADY I HAVE WAITED TO FOCKING LONG [sob..sob ..sob..sob]

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great i cant wait for the next chapter

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Nice chapter. It's good to see Harry confident and a sure leader.

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I was so glad you finally updated. I love this story. It is so very different from all of the others. Can't wait for the next chapter.

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i can't read your chapters fant enough. please write aqnd post faster

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Cool!!! please continue :)

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well that shapter ws different the language there was pretty bad but then again i guess u had your reasons its just that harry would neve say those sort of things........and dont forget about mione u still havent got them together yet

Author's Response: harry is a leader of an army what do you think they talk like that was from patton's speech and that was watered down lol and yes i know i have it planned out how and when so keep reading

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LOVE IT... But why wouldn't I... I check them :P lol. Keep writing.. I will work on starting the second story... 4 u

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Aside from some of the worst grammar mistakes I've ever been a witness to, this is a damn good storu. Im guessing your english is bad for you to make mistakes like this and I would suggest a beta reader so you dont have to worry about it. Don't take it the wrong way, I just dont think great writing should be overshadowed by bad grammar.

Author's Response: yeah i have not been really paying attion to that much i entend to correct all chapters by the way in some parts the characters are speaking to think to others or to them selves and well do you use the rightt gramer i think not but i will correct all that i can

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Aside from some of the worst grammar mistakes I've ever been a witness to, this is a damn good storu. Im guessing your english is bad for you to make mistakes like this and I would suggest a beta reader so you dont have to worry about it. Don't take it the wrong way, I just dont think great writing should be overshadowed by bad grammar.

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When are you going to update?? This story is great.. please continue.

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Please don't take this the wrong way cuz i LOVE YOUR FANFIC. BUT I CAN'T TAKE IT ANY MORE I JUST CAN'T WAIT TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE HURRY UP.

Author's Response: i am but i have been really busy with birthdays injeries and work and i am trying lol i am also developing two new stories plus i just posted my one shot take a look

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Hey I am ready to review another chapter!!!!!! Is there one coming soon?

Author's Response: yeah soon in fact i plan on finshing the next chapte tonight so it should be up in a few days ps my one shot should be up soon

Author's Response: one shot up

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this story is soooooooooooooooooo amazin i cant wait for the next chapter, u are such a gr8 writer, plz update soon, luv sophie

Author's Response: awww now i am turning all red

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That was definitely worth the wait. I can't wait for the next chapter. You are a wonderful writer keep up the good work. ~Bob_015

Author's Response: thank you

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well, it is up! woot i love it lots :)

Author's Response: took a bit to get it up lol you wont have to wait that long for the next one

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