3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by cat92ba Prologue

5th July 2007:
I like this. it's cool. The title is awsome!

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Review #2, by Hermione_88 Prologue

11th October 2005:
Hi! I really like this story - you're asking for constructive criticism huh? There's nothing much to criticize except that maybe there are a few spelling and grammatical errors - nothing life threatening. I really like the style of writing though - it's very original with original names and it's quite witty! Keep going – I’m quite intrigued!

Author's Response: Thanks yo. I'm kinda having trouble getting up steam to write the second chapter, mainly because it keeps getting rejected for god knows what reason. Thanks for the review again!! -J.

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Review #3, by Amanda the rater Prologue

17th September 2005:
Good!!! What is this my secound next generation fic I read third. O'well hope the next one comes out soon!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I just submitted chapter two yesterday, so it should be available any time soon.

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