6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Yemi Hikari Chapter One: Destruction by the Forbidden Curse

25th July 2011:
Truth of the matter is, this fanfic has some very good material that could be used. However, it comes across as jumbled and to many questions are being brought up. The set up is also kind of weak too, not to mention the characterization leaves a lot to be desired.

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Review #2, by Yemi Hikari Proposal

25th July 2011:
I have to ask why Voldemort would care that the female left him. If she had been one of his Death Eaters, then it goes without saying that she would have agreed with his ideals most likely. If she had not been one of his Death Eaters, he would have simply not cared enough to chase after some female that he had used for pleasure. If it had been because she was carrying his child, then the Death Eaters would NOT have tried killing the child or leaving her for dead. Not to mention the only conection to the HP univerce seems to be her background.

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Review #3, by mrsmolly Chapter One: Destruction by the Forbidden Curse

21st February 2007:
please update

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Review #4, by mrsmolly Proposal

21st February 2007:
please write it right away- it sounds awesome!

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Review #5, by Jt Chapter One: Destruction by the Forbidden Curse

4th October 2004:
Wow! In the next chapter, make it so the turtles see the magic? Please? 0= ) Rim hennaid (Many thanks) for a very good crossover story! Never thought that I was going to see a Tmnt Hp crossover. Eh. Keep writing! I want to read more !

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Review #6, by Jt Chapter One: Destruction by the Forbidden Curse

4th October 2004:
Wow! In the next chapter, make it so the turtles see the magic? Please? 0= ) Rim hennaid (Many thanks) for a very good crossover story! Never thought that I was going to see a Tmnt Hp crossover. Eh. Keep writing! I want to read more !

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