{reviewid: 1864551, reviewer: 'caity'}
15th March 2008:
I don't know what to say. it's a good story, you can write well but there is no actual plot. this story is going nowhere until you get a plot planned out.
keep writing! it will be interesting to see where you take this story!
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{reviewid: 659328, reviewer: 'Liss_rox'}
21st August 2005:
haha funni stuff i like it...lol keep it up..its a gud story
Alissa
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{reviewid: 518690, reviewer: 'tonya_malfoy'}
28th May 2005:
ooooooooooooo write more soon
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{reviewid: 375172, reviewer: '_cupidz_arrow_'}
14th February 2005:
LOLOLOLOLOLOL THE FUNIEST STORY EVER!
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{reviewid: 373770, reviewer: 'ravenlupin'}
13th February 2005:
lol
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{reviewid: 373769, reviewer: 'ravenlupin'}
13th February 2005:
love it!
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{reviewid: 373767, reviewer: 'ravenlupin'}
13th February 2005:
very funny
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{reviewid: 69469, reviewer: 'Lunalovegood99'}
20th September 2003:
lol
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{reviewid: 69278, reviewer: 'WhiteFerretsRok'}
19th September 2003:
yay! i like dis! when i saw The Video as the chappie title....i got just a weee bit scrared u were gona...erm...go "into detail." but thank god u didn't. anyways, super kool!
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{reviewid: 69175, reviewer: 'Ashley%21%21%21'}
19th September 2003:
perfect! love it! write more!
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{reviewid: 69134, reviewer: 'Akura'}
18th September 2003:
Ooo, nice, nice, I like, l like! Please continue! I think Emma is gonna be my fav. character. ^_^
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{reviewid: 69084, reviewer: 'Lunalovegood99'}
18th September 2003:
it's good....
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{reviewid: 68993, reviewer: 'anon'}
17th September 2003:
very... interesting
hehe, please write more! i wanna see what happens next!
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