{reviewid: 2346869, reviewer: 'sinwillys822'}
13th May 2010:
wow what a cliffie can't wait to read what happens next.
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{reviewid: 1778414, reviewer: 'IS%20bookworm'}
4th January 2008:
I loved it! I don't like the ending though! I mean that is like a cliffie! I won't hold it against you especially since there is a sequell ; 7) Poor Hermione! I'm so sad that Draco died! :7)
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{reviewid: 1778401, reviewer: 'IS%20bookworm'}
4th January 2008:
I loved it! I hope Draco doesn't stick with the Death Eaters! I loved it! :7)
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{reviewid: 1778393, reviewer: 'IS%20bookworm'}
4th January 2008:
Did Ron really kill her?! I hope her love will save her! I loved it! :7)
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{reviewid: 1778378, reviewer: 'IS%20bookworm'}
4th January 2008:
They'll do it! yeah! I'm glad everyone's alright! :7)
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{reviewid: 1778368, reviewer: 'IS%20bookworm'}
4th January 2008:
OH NO!! I hope they're okay! Why did they stand outside the door for so long? I loved it! :7)
PS I noticed a mistake
to the women I will always love Draco
shouldn't it be woman?
:7)
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{reviewid: 1778332, reviewer: 'IS%20bookworm'}
4th January 2008:
OOH!! I loved it! I'm glad her aunt is fine with Draco! :7)
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{reviewid: 1778318, reviewer: 'IS%20bookworm'}
4th January 2008:
OOH!! Poor Ginny and Harry! I loved it! :7)
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{reviewid: 1778301, reviewer: 'IS%20bookworm'}
4th January 2008:
OOH!! I loved it! I hope they don't keep it a secret too long! But it would be hard to tell anyone! I loved it! :7)
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{reviewid: 1778280, reviewer: 'IS%20bookworm'}
4th January 2008:
OOH!! I loved it! They kissed!! Yeah! I love how her dress is Slytherin colors. Was that on purpose? I loved it! :7)
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{reviewid: 1775534, reviewer: 'IS%20bookworm'}
2nd January 2008:
OOH!! I really liked it! :7)
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{reviewid: 1775522, reviewer: 'IS%20bookworm'}
2nd January 2008:
Oh no!! I loved it! :7)
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{reviewid: 1775512, reviewer: 'IS%20bookworm'}
2nd January 2008:
Wow! That's a really bad summer! I loved it! :7)
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{reviewid: 1775486, reviewer: 'IS%20bookworm'}
2nd January 2008:
I hope that isn't the future! I want them to be together! I loved it! It was kind of sudden though! :7)
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{reviewid: 1775473, reviewer: 'IS%20bookworm'}
2nd January 2008:
I loved it! Those clothes were very unHermioneish! :7)
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{reviewid: 1713888, reviewer: 'tamaramaks'}
17th November 2007:
I like this story but I thinks it's slightly immature. It's still good though and nothing helps more then a little constructive critisism. good luck with the rest. 8/10
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{reviewid: 1695533, reviewer: 'Quidditch%20Chick%2001'}
3rd November 2007:
This was a sad chapter.
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{reviewid: 1650081, reviewer: 'dramionefan'}
30th September 2007:
W T FUDGE? huh wot just happened ?
-X-X-X- Dramionefan - Kayleigh -X-X-X-
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{reviewid: 1649941, reviewer: 'dramionefan'}
30th September 2007:
o likin it and girl power and gyffindor and 10/10
-X-X-X- Dramionefan - Kayleigh -X-X-X-
P.S. sorry for babbling
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{reviewid: 1637806, reviewer: 'hanoverpretz01'}
20th September 2007:
super sad, but really good.
:)
Author's Response: Thank you so much, the sequal i snow posted to this story
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{reviewid: 1538818, reviewer: 'TheHerioneHermione'}
28th July 2007:
its good. I can't wait to read the second one!
Author's Response: ahh, the second one is kind of in slow motion right now. I'm rtying to speed up thoug! I swear I have so many wip stories that I'm killing myself writing.
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{reviewid: 1506160, reviewer: 'anonomous'}
10th July 2007:
Why did the black smoke come out you said black smoke comes out when they're dead Why WHy WHY
Author's Response: i can't truthfully say because that was so long ago that i wrote it
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{reviewid: 1465640, reviewer: 'Quidditch%20Chick%2001'}
16th June 2007:
Wow, a lot of time must have passed.
Author's Response: yah i had problems keeping my times correct, so not even i know how long it really had been
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{reviewid: 1465623, reviewer: 'Quidditch%20Chick%2001'}
16th June 2007:
I hope she's not dead! Ron was the one who was trying to kill Draco right?
Author's Response: don't worry soon you'll know everything
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{reviewid: 1390262, reviewer: 'liandhate'}
22nd April 2007:
It definetly improved. But there still are some errors. Just go through it again, edit it, and it will be great. It has a great plot.
cheers
li
8/10
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I just don't have that much time on my hands so I let the computer spell check it, and it's pretty outdated. I hope the sequal is better, the first chapter is up but I'm working on another story (well 2) right now, so look for it over summer.
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