5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Woot At the beginning-Diagon Ally

23rd November 2005:
OOOKKKKKKAAAAYYYYYyyyyyy . . . Your poetic words were touching. So much so, that we had to dose the hideous flames with his wonderful spit. That's besides the point. Here's a little tale for your little mind. I hope you can understand the words. Once upon a time, there was a man. That homo sapien became a fish. That fish became the wonderful stories of Harry Potter. THE END That was just a slight example of well-to-do writing. It also depicts the acurateness of your delightful little tale. There are some basic facts that you need to get straightened out. If "Lily's" "parents" were "muggles", than how would they know about "Diagon Alley" at all? Also, who is Jare-ODD you speak of? What by gollywog is an "aisled This girl with hair of red must be AWFULLY perceptive to be able to read someone else's features that well the very same day THEY MET THEM. Hmm . . . curiouser and curiouser . . . AMEN. God bless the United States of America, and BUCK FUSH!!!!!!!!!!!!! I want to throw fish!

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Review #2, by Rhea At the beginning-Diagon Ally

5th November 2005:
Hey dis is reali gd x Nevilles mums called Alice by da way xxx

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Review #3, by XD At the beginning-Diagon Ally

17th September 2005:
ooh kool nicely written >.<

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Review #4, by shaer At the beginning-Diagon Ally

15th September 2005:

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Review #5, by Radcliffe_PotterFan319 At the beginning-Diagon Ally

8th September 2005:
Neville's mother's name is Alice. Her last name is unknown.

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