cute story, pretty typical for a 15 yr old girl to fall in and out of love so quickly.

Author's Response: Yup, you're right, extremely typical. Ah, the teenage heart is very changeable! Thanks for your review!

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A very clever story, the way you made everyone think it was Harry she was thinking about at the start! A nice little piece.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked my trickery :).

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good one but i'm quite confused

Author's Response: Yeah, sorry about that. I wrote this a lot time ago! I think I'm going to try to redo it at some point and make it clearer.

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well i like the idea i just don't think i understood it really til the end, and i am still not quite sure of wat i read. and.. wat were the stars(*)??? ummm maybe it woudle be better if u stuck to one persons pro.(instead of third omnicient do third limited or first, its a little easier!
~Sprinkles(don't ask =])

Author's Response: Yeah I'm not sure its completely clear, myself. The *s were meant to be italics (when I first uploaded this story I couldn't figure out how to work italics). Thanks for the advice!

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Dude, I dont think you should touch one thing. I love this one-shot, even if it has some minor faults it was the second thing you ever wrote! Its nice to be able to see the progress writers make as they go on. Its nice to see someones best and then see how they can improve it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I really appreciate you noticing how I've improved through my stories. I think you might be right about leaving it as it is. Its encouraging to know that you think I've progressed a bit. Thanks again!

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you have an amazing way to mention the most important fact at the last line-- Draco Malfoy. GO HARRY. he did something right! something that wasn't stupid! heh. Anyways. good job!

Author's Response: Thanks! A lot of people didn't like that I added in the fact that it was Draco all along but I think it works.

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Not your best shot but it's still quite good. I would try and be more descriptive in this situation - tell me more about the character Ginny's pining over, give more history, slow down her talk with Harry. When she begins to cry it feels very out of the blue and fake. Tweak that scene a bit and this could turn out to be a real gem.

Author's Response: You know I do agree with you about this one. This was only the second thing that I'd ever written so I was quite proud of writing it in the first place. I have thought in the past that it needs tweaking and changing but I just haven't got around to it yet- thank you for your constructive critisizm! It really is useful.

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i really liked it...i can almost see ginny shouting in harry's face... it's soooo funny!!
good one
GB

Author's Response: Thanks!

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What a TWIST. UnBELIEVABLE. Unreal. GNARLY. Man, I jive your way. Aha. Ye-ess.

Author's Response: Gnarly, dude! That is such a good word. And yet I'm not quite sure what it means...

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I do like i. it is very sweet andcute and funny. YAY ginny. Me vuvs Ginny

Author's Response: Thanks! It was intended just to be a big ball of fluff so I'm glad I achieved that!

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cute!!! But I'd love for it to be continued you know.. maybe add a chapter with them together... but it's the first fanfict I've read today that I've liked (I just found this site) so keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Wow, I'm flattered! I didn't really think it needed an extra chapter- I didn't really know where it should go from there anyway!

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Oooh that was so clever. If only there was more to read

Author's Response: Sorry! Thanks anyway!

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it's cute! awwwwwwwwwww! *carried away* yeah...the ending confused me a bit, but im stupid, so whatever. i liked how you didnt reveal "Him" until the end, though. yeah.

Author's Response: Thanks! I know its a bit confusing but I liked the idea of having a twist at the end of the story- I actually started writing it with Harry as the 'him' then I decided to trick the reader instead. It was one of the first fanfic that I wrote so I'm glad how it turned out.

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I like it too.

Author's Response: Thanks!

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I loked it. It was well written and the ending was great.

Author's Response: Thanks! A lot of people have said the ending was confusing so I'm glad that you liked it!

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This was cute I really liked it!

Author's Response: Thanks! I think it definitely goes under the heading 'cute' and 'fluffy'

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I'm sory, I know this isn't about your story....but do you watch SG-1??? I mean, the indeed, the three fries short of a happy meal...It all ends in that conclusion. Sorry, I know it was oof topic

Author's Response: I do watch SG-1. I never thought it influenced me but...my God, you're right!! I never even noticed. Wow.

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It was awesome! It was well written, and you really played them in charector. Good Job!

Author's Response: Thanks!

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well... this is sooooooooo my kind of fic. can i just say though, do you perhaps think hermione and Ron had Ulterior Motives for sending Harry to talk to her? i love harry/ginny slash so this is great!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! And I hadn't actually thought about the Ron/ Hermione factor (although I am a shipper), but it does make sense. It was probably my inner shipper saying 'hmm, ron and hermione, alone....'

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yay

Author's Response: indeed

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I like it! I know it's completed..but sequel anyone?

Author's Response: Yeah, maybe if I ever get inspirational at any point in the future. Probably not going to happen.

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ew why draco?

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Have finally read the story and I think its great. To be perfectly honest, I'd like to see much more (sorry, had to say it) happen in this story as it is one of the best I've read of yours. Some of your others too! Keep up the good work and I hope to read more. Also, thanks for dedicating it to me (and Leila and Rosa) since I have to read loads!! From your most excellent friend, Jenna.

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Hey good job, a little confused at first but maybe that's just me! Keep writing! -HisGirl

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harry = kewl

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