i liked it...................you could do alot with a follow up!!! can't wait to read more of your stuff!!!! @~`~~

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cool story

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as the saying goes...a leopard can't change its spots. well i guess you proved that wrong. i can't see snape being that nice to harry. he only does what he has to. iguess you can't "hate" someone because you didn't get along with thier parents. but i did llike the story & you have a talent there for someone young. keep it up. ta ta for now.

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I read it through, and I set my standards too high . For a third grader, its impreessive. But like anything else, practice makes perfect. Your on the right track though.

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great topic butyour style needs to be worked on. you have promise. I feel flat hen I read this. To many he did this and he did that. Theres nobreak in that with queattions to build the mysteryor emotions. You are watching what is happening, but your not really inside the charachters head. What are they thinking and FEELING. Harry and Snape are to of the greatest psyches in HP, and this falls short

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Great story!!!!!

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Snape would never, never befriend Harry

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it needs more teenage angst. its childish, its to easy, it needs to be harder. but other than that it was pretty cool. good job!

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Thats Siriusly fluffy ficcing! *evil chuckle* So cute. I like the idea of the whole Snape as father figure thing as unlikely as it may be its still a great genre (what else can you call it?) to read. :)

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This was good. I like Snape as a person with more emotion than in j.k.\'s books. I really like Helluin\'s Invenion Veritas as I see you do too. I really liked this story. At times it seemed like there were parts skipped, but overall I really liked it. I would really appreciate it if you would read what I have of my fan fic so far. I only have two chapters up right now but i might get the third one up tonight. Thanks. Great job. I\'ll try and read more of your stuff soon.

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vary well written (typed)

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The story is... interesting. I like the more lovable Snape, but it would be much more readable if you used a bit longer senteces and not just past simle.

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I don\'t know it was good.. but I believe you need more detail.. there are a few holes but other than that it was good.

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This was awesome. We have different point of views that are the same though. I like fics where Dudley and Harry make up and become caring cousins, which you said you didn\'t really like. And you like Snape getting along better with Harry, which I think takes away half of the battle at Hogwarts....That\'s awesome.... I did love the story though it was great. Keep on writing your doing great.

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This was a great fic! If you have more I should have to read them. Keep writing!

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More, more!!!!

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Oh is this story ever getting good!!! I can\'t wait to see what happens, write more please!!!! :)

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why must harry go through so much pain? He is a good buy, nevertheless, it\'s is your best story yet.

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Good story, I liked it a lot :)

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Nice. Great idea of the father figure. Who\'d have thoght dumbledore would barge into the dursleys house. Keep up the excelent writing!

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Excellent start, and very well written. I can\'t wait for more!

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