Eh...it was okay...i really didn't like the fact that you used their nicknames instead of their real ones.to many p names.=]

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hahaha i loved it :D
siri and jamie were so cute in the end!

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This is really good

I love it

Keep on writting

*hugs*

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Aren't they naughtly... That's so funny the Maurders are crazed loonies!!! this is a very well written bit congrates is due

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aww. That poor bartender. This is a hysterical story. I enjoyed it very much!

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''There was a scream so loud that the bar tender decided to make a guest appearance (he had been hiding in the back room) to see if all his customers will still in one piece. '' LOL I loved this story! It was hilarious! The last line...lol Great job! ~Anastasia

Author's Response: These characters are always so fun to write! I didn't set out to make it funny but everything I write about them always comes out that way bacause thats just the type of people thay were. I'm really glad you enjoyed it:) the grumpy bartender is one of my favorites in this one to. thanks for reviewing!

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Ah-ha-ha-ha-ha!!!!!!!!! This is hilarious!

Author's Response: thanks a bunch!!

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Lol. I liked it. Nice=)

Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you liked it!

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that was great! funny, but really sweet too. i love how it was all mysterious and spooky at the beginning... james is a good actor, lol. the last line adds a magnificent touch =)

Author's Response: Afew people told me they didn't like the last line but now I'm glad I kept it! Thanks for reviewing!

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dats a wicked story

Author's Response: thanks!

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Hi! I liked it, especially when James tells them, that they would bad influence on the baby. ;-) LoL!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. I had alot of fun writting it!

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