It's sad, but also very real, in a way that these kind of things really aren't, if you kno wat i mean. Well, we do need that sugar coated reality and fluff once in a while, but we don't need stories about deep depression and drinking habits and dystopian futures that much either. I really liked it, and could relate to Hermione very well. It made me feel good about myself, in a way these things never do. Report Review
wow i hate him. hes a jerk. i never really liked cho ethier so *gr* wow Dray was well you know i mean you wrote it lol
awsome story.Author's Response: >.< Thanks so much for the review, and yeah he was pretty mean :(. Thanks! Report Review
Wow, Harry really ticked me off in this story. I think that's how Hermione would have acted in this situation, ya know:Head high, never letting anyone see her cry, tough. Great story by the way!Author's Response: : D Thanks! I've been meaning to edit this. xD I'm glad you felt a connection with one of the characters, it shows me that she is a somewhat realistic character. Thanks for the input, and I'm glad you liked it. Report Review
what a wonderful story in that sda kind of tragety sort of way.
I cannot believe Harry who would have thought that
Harry of all people would hurt Hermione so badly.
Normally Im not one much for song fics but this one
was amazing and i think that has alot to do with the
author so bravo or brava. Well don I liked it alot.
*hugs* ashleyAuthor's Response: Oh, thanks so much :D. I'm glad you enjoyed it some much! Thank you for the rating, too =). Report Review
This is the most Awesomest songfic ever!!Author's Response: Lol, thank you :D. I'm glad you liked it :S. Report Review
i cant believe harry did that. great writingAuthor's Response: Thank you for the review :D. Nice username/name, by the way! Report Review
mucho caliente. i have NO idea why i just said that because that mean very hot. haha. well, in ay case, your story was very hott...thats hott...haha jk jk jk, i hate paris hilton...anyways! uhm, right! great story ten outta tenAuthor's Response: Lmao xD. Caliente = hot. I'll have to remember that one for 'talk time' in Spanish class xD. Bahaha I'm glad you found it hot *cough*ParisHiltonFreak*cough* xD. I hate her too xD.
Thank you for the rating and all the reviews =D. Report Review
Very nicely written! This was very good! Oh but why did you have to make Harry the bad guy?!?! That was the only part I didn't like! Other than Cho, of course. I hate her for some odd reason. Yes, Im not afraid to say the word hate. Im sorry if thatseems too harsh! :-PAuthor's Response: Thank you!! I'm really glad you liked it :P. Haha, you can hate her, it's okay =P. Though I'm not one for the word, by all means continue with your hating hah.
Sorry it had to be Harry Dx. I just didn't have to heart to make it Ron, he's the bad guy in ALL my other stories so there had to be a little Harry-hating lol. Not all "good-guys" are always good ;D. I think this shows that there really isn't anything near perfection in the world in a way =P.
Wow, now I'm getting all into it lmao. A complete analysis for you, dah-ling ;D. I do hope you read it lol.
Thanks, again! Report Review
It's a bit... naive... not like your other work, but it's still really good. I really like how you didn't pair Hermione up with anyone in the end. It seems almost lifelike and realistic. Author's Response: Hm... well I wrote it about two years before the others if that counts for anything =/. At least you still liked it though =). Thanks for reading it and my other story(ies) as well! I totallly appreciate the feedback. Thanks for being truthful! Report Review
awsomenessAuthor's Response: Thanks! Report Review
they were supposed to end up toghether......not hate each other!!!!!Author's Response: Lol, I'm sorryyy!! Thanks for reading! Report Review
Update?Author's Response: Nope, it's just a one-shot! I'm sorry =(. Thanks for the review though!! Report Review
Update?Author's Response: Bah! You made a double review =P. That's okay though :). Thanks for reading! Report Review
go hermione!. wow ..harry was a bastard in this fic...i wanted to slap him...really HARD!
dana...would u happen to go to a school in fl?...and r going into 11 grade within this coming month?
love, normaAuthor's Response: Hahaha I'm glad you hated evil Harry, means I did my job well ;).
Nope, don't live in Florida; but I vacation there often! And, again, nope; I'm going into 10th grade ((sophomore)).
Thankkss for reviewing!! Report Review
hey. you just gave my favourite hero a bad name. %$@#!!!!!!Author's Response: Lol, I'm sorry! Thanks for reading, even though I'm not entirely sure if you liked it or not ;). Report Review
Yeah...I've already reviewed sooo many times, (once as a bathroom cleaner), but I must say I've just been to your website, and I loooove it!!! Yay!!!! I must be dumb, (sorry, slow person, here! ;-), seeing how I still do not know how to contact you...so I'm using a review to tell you that your website rox!! :D Sorry, you don't have to answer this! Hehe...okay, later!! ;-)
~Emma~ Author's Response: Lol! It's okay. If you want to contact me any more (which, since you're cool, I wouldn't mind) just go to my site and comment or something and I'll e-mail you! And thanks, the site took forever to make :P. Report Review
Ugh, Draco/Hermione??!! Sorry, partial to Ron/Hermione. Hehe. But thanx, and your cool, too! ;-)
~EmmaAuthor's Response: Lol, yes, Draco/Hermione! I'm only for Ron and Hermione in the actual books. JK has a certain way with words (xD) about that little 'fling'. Report Review
Wow...ME?? COOL?? LOL. Thanks!! ;-)
Emma~ Author's Response: Lol, of course you are! I checked out your stories. Not Draco/Hermione but oh well! I'll read one of them and review :). Report Review
Sweet, yes!!! I got sooo bored one day, and I decided to have a little reviewing-fun! LOL...I am glad you thought my review was THE BEST!! Hahaha, ok, so I am actually Emma_Star, if you'd like to read my work! I feel so happy now, reading your reply made me feel so cheerful!
ABS...Emma_Star ;-) Author's Response: Haha, but seriously, your review totally rocked! I was cracking up!! You're cool. I'll check out your account/stories :D. Report Review
Yo Yo Yo, your story rocks my world!!!! Where'd you get the idea??? www.storythatrocksmyworld.com??? Well, it does, so good job. Oh yeah, Oh yeah, Oh yeah!!! Sweet! I love Dairy Queen! Turtle Sundaez rock my world. Gotta go spray some spray on my bathroom surfaces....Lata, Mega Man!!!! ;-0Author's Response: Lmao!! Niice!! Haha, that was THE BEST review I have ever gotten. Mega propz to you, YO. Hah, and I like your signature name thing, haha.
I'm glad you liked my story. And, No, I got the idea from Kelly Clarkson... you know... the artist of the song :P. Haha.
Thanks for the review, I loved it! Report Review
oh i love ur story!!! and the best part is that harry is a jerk like finally someone made him lok bad!! great story i'd probably give it a 9 out of 10!!!Author's Response: Oh thanks soo much! A lot of people think that's a plus to the story; a different side of Harry. Thanks for the ratings too =). Report Review
That was awesome! I love the ending!!!Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! Report Review
but i like it!!!!
gud job!!!!!!!!Author's Response: Gud? Lol thanks!! Report Review
i like this one alot Author's Response: Thanks!! Report Review
Great story!Author's Response: Thanks! Report Review
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