{reviewid: 940379, reviewer: 'lola'}
17th March 2006:
This is probably the greatest fan fiction ever
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{reviewid: 939640, reviewer: 'nikki'}
16th March 2006:
story keep up the good work
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{reviewid: 939607, reviewer: 'nicky'}
16th March 2006:
(A/N: Yes, I know that in HBP Slughorn gloats about knowing a female Quidditch player, but Slughorn struck me as hypocritical
Lol
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{reviewid: 896521, reviewer: 'Water%20Spirit'}
10th February 2006:
Up date soooooooooooooooooooooon I want to see how James wins Lily over and how things turn out with Mark and her
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{reviewid: 895204, reviewer: 'JEMMA'}
9th February 2006:
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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{reviewid: 893843, reviewer: 'Mary'}
7th February 2006:
ITS GREAT YOUR STORY AND I HOPE YOU KEEP GOING. WELL PLZ SEND AND E-MAIL TO cornet_91@yahoo.com FOR I TO KNOW WHEN YOU UP DATE THE NEW CHAPTER. FOR I COME TO READ IT AND REVIEW. WELL, LATER AND HOPE YOU SEND THE MAIL. PLZ
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{reviewid: 893274, reviewer: 'Psykotic_potterholics'}
7th February 2006:
You're doing fine. I like that you like to switch from seventh year to first. But it seems as if you always make the characters you don't like idiots/misogynists. Peter is their best friend, even if he is a traitor, you shouldn't make him sound so silly. And Slughorn is so OC. Even the reaction of the students to Slughorn seems OC, I don't think they'll start gagging if they touch a piece of parchement that he touched. One more thing: “Help me to get to go out with me,” Huh? You mean Help me to get LILY to go out with me. Over-all, its good. I give it a 7/10
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{reviewid: 893185, reviewer: 'witch767667'}
7th February 2006:
Excellent story keep writing! I liked the part where James says that Lily is his then Remes says "She's not yours." It's kind of funny if you think about it. I can't beleive that Wormtail likes Lily!! I MEAN I CAN'T BELIVE HE LIKES LILY!!!!!!!! Great Story update soon!
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{reviewid: 892922, reviewer: 'heartachin4harry'}
7th February 2006:
Your story is so good! I loved it. What will James do! THis end right here could cause slight problems. Update soon!
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{reviewid: 892336, reviewer: 'amberg93'}
6th February 2006:
awww, its so cute
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{reviewid: 892326, reviewer: 'amberg93'}
6th February 2006:
Peter likes Lily, ewwww
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{reviewid: 892322, reviewer: 'amberg93'}
6th February 2006:
i liked it
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{reviewid: 892313, reviewer: 'amberg93'}
6th February 2006:
true true, and Greg is annoying
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{reviewid: 892306, reviewer: 'hogwartsgirlhg'}
6th February 2006:
that is nice
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{reviewid: 892304, reviewer: 'amberg93'}
6th February 2006:
No, complete sentences are boring
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{reviewid: 892296, reviewer: 'amberg93'}
6th February 2006:
nice
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{reviewid: 892159, reviewer: 'xtonex'}
6th February 2006:
ohhh i lv it.poor james but mark seems nice great on ya flower girl no lily.lol.k bi hunxx
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{reviewid: 891903, reviewer: 'bumi924'}
6th February 2006:
nice story ! up date soon !
but i don't get is why there are parts that are told when they where little ?
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{reviewid: 891609, reviewer: 'Um'}
6th February 2006:
Sqeeee!
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{reviewid: 891315, reviewer: 'amberg93'}
5th February 2006:
i loved the comments
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{reviewid: 891311, reviewer: 'amberg93'}
5th February 2006:
lol, slughorn is hypocritical
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{reviewid: 891298, reviewer: 'amberg93'}
5th February 2006:
its a plan
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{reviewid: 891293, reviewer: 'amberg93'}
5th February 2006:
i like it
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{reviewid: 891288, reviewer: 'amberg93'}
5th February 2006:
good start
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{reviewid: 830520, reviewer: 'I_LOVE_BOOKS'}
28th December 2005:
good chapter
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