{reviewid: 2104022, reviewer: 'kazfeist'}
23rd April 2009:
Very nice. Some spelling/typo distractions, but a nice progression through to the end. :D
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{reviewid: 1974429, reviewer: 'jenrabbit'}
26th October 2008:
Aww, that was sweet, and I can see Pansy being a hopeless romantic under it all, lol. You're an extremely talented author, don't ever give it up, the world would be many words poorer if you did. ^.^
kisses
~*Jeni*~
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{reviewid: 919287, reviewer: 'Box_Of_Souls'}
27th February 2006:
That was fantastic. Very smooth in writing and beleivable. Short and sweet. Fantastic.
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{reviewid: 918638, reviewer: 'Malfoys_Mistress'}
26th February 2006:
Aw that was so sweet and kinda worrying at first coz i had the impression they would split or sumfin. I'm glad they didn't, good story!
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{reviewid: 790755, reviewer: 'real_life_sucks'}
30th November 2005:
gah! I swear, your Dramione stories will be the death of me! You right so good! If I wasn't already a shipper of them, I deffinitly would be now, after reading yours!!!
Author's Response: Oh, thank you. This was actually written for a fic exchange, so I had to put in certain things. Glad it came out well. :)
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{reviewid: 729777, reviewer: 'DarkMarkGirl'}
11th October 2005:
very good except that you made ron out to be a tab bit of an idiot.lol
Author's Response: LOL...>.<
I know I made him an idiot but it did add some humor....I think.
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{reviewid: 701964, reviewer: 'Hell%20Hath%20No%20Fury'}
20th September 2005:
Loved it!!! So very much... very sweet
Author's Response: Oh, thanks so much.
Author's Response: Oh, thanks so much.
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{reviewid: 690632, reviewer: 'mel'}
11th September 2005:
< br> This was very well written. I think you showed a different aspect to both Draco and Hermione. Somthing that is often lost in fanfiction. br>
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< br>Good Job! br>
Author's Response: Thank you kindly. :)
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{reviewid: 682091, reviewer: 'musicsetsmefree'}
4th September 2005:
I don't even see how this ship came into being but how I love it :) Cute story
Author's Response: I don't know either but I do know that this ship= love. Thanks so much for the review.
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{reviewid: 675869, reviewer: 'mybabyboi_draco'}
31st August 2005:
Your story is gorgeous...write more!!!
Author's Response: Oh, thanks so much. I appreciate that. This story is technically done but I could be inclined to write a sequel. Anyway thanks so much.
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{reviewid: 674827, reviewer: 'always4gotten'}
30th August 2005:
love it
Author's Response: Thanks a bunch.
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{reviewid: 674815, reviewer: 'DarkenedSoul671'}
30th August 2005:
I absolutely loved this one shot! If I could add it to my favorites (darkenedsoul671) then i would but for some reason i can't get signed in! Anyways I loved it!
Author's Response: Oh thanks so much. Glad you liked it. I had the same problem with signing in yesterday but it was okay later on so signing in later should work. Good work with that and thanks for the review.
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{reviewid: 674655, reviewer: 'Anna'}
30th August 2005:
aw.......... :') such a happy ending :) *sniff*
Author's Response: Oh, thanks. I tired. Glad it came out happy.
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{reviewid: 674083, reviewer: 'moonygirl12'}
30th August 2005:
nice. i enjoyed reading it. :-)
Author's Response: Thanks so much.
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{reviewid: 670579, reviewer: 'Felicity'}
28th August 2005:
Aw nice story! Very nice and well written! I loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. :)
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{reviewid: 670237, reviewer: 'Jellyman'}
28th August 2005:
That was really good! You have a really good style of writing!
Author's Response: Oh, thanks so much. I tried. I appreciate the review.
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{reviewid: 670217, reviewer: 'fairgirl'}
28th August 2005:
ohhhhhh that was so cute, very good.excellent one-shot.
Author's Response: thanks so much. :)
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{reviewid: 669391, reviewer: 'harrypotter151'}
27th August 2005:
omg that was awaome i love it i loved it i lovred it that was oooooooo good ur an awsome writer
Author's Response: *blushes* Oh, thank you so much. I really appreciate it.
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{reviewid: 669207, reviewer: 'Cherry%20lips%20and%20Blackened%20eyes'}
27th August 2005:
Sweet . . .
Author's Response: Thank you kindly.
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{reviewid: 668796, reviewer: 'Entropy'}
27th August 2005:
I like how you characterized Pansy here. She actually had a heart, she wasn't the stupid oaf and evil Pansy we have come to know. I think you characterized it well, that Hermione's tired of hiding it, not being truthful, but also afraid of what would happen if others found out. I also liked the whole "oil and water" theme, but in the title you should write out "and" instead of just having the symbol "&."
Author's Response: Thank you. I tried with the Pansy thing, but even I portray her as a evil or a little bit stupid at times, so this was a change. I don't think Pansy was meant to be that way but it works for most of my stories. When I think about it she actually is probably rather smart. But, anyway, thanks for the review. I appreciate it. You are probably right. I should change the title. Thanks.
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{reviewid: 668319, reviewer: 'shadowbabe'}
26th August 2005:
I loved that, it was short, with enough back story, and sweet! Long Live Siruis! ♥
Author's Response: Thanks so much. And I couldn't agree more. Love live Sirius!!!
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{reviewid: 667747, reviewer: 'Penny%20Lane'}
26th August 2005:
"She when was it that she..."
I think here you meant to write "So when was it..." I just thought I'd point that out. But other than that, aside from the fact that it lacks a few descriptive qualities here and there, I liked it :)
Author's Response: Oh! Thanks so much. I will edit it as soon as possible. I thought I saw a typo before I posted it but when I looked back over it I couldn't find it. Thanks so much for finding it for me.
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