Lovely darling. Absolutely lovely! -ChiiAuthor's Response: Thank you, dear. =D
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Aww...! You write Lily very well! As i've said before..I love how you pretty much dive into the person's thoughts and go crazy with it...you are an awesome writer Travvy! I can't wait to read chapter 2 of this fic! --MerryAuthor's Response: You make me smile so much with your reviews, Merry. Thank you very, very much. =) I'm glad you love how I portrayed Lily. I was a little unsure at first how I was going to do that. =P I'll have the next chapter out sometime this week! Wahoo! Thanks again for your review!
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Beautiful writing - I love the way you captured Lily's character. I did find it a little... disturbing that Lily kept calling Sirius 'poppet' though. And I think you might have made James a bit too insensitive, but I'm guessing that will be remedied in future chapters...Author's Response: Aww, why thank you for your review! ^_^ ...Yeah...the poppet thing. =P Lily and Sirius - in this fic, at least - are just like really good friends, you know. And mostly everything will be remedied in future chapters. ;) In the beginning, Lily and James are huge enemies, and...let's see. I think by Christmas they start liking each other. So yeah! Thanks for reviewing, I love hearing your comments. =D Report Review
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