XD lol at Paige preparing for her date...

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Hilarious when Paige got caught by James...

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Lol at Amy and Paige swooning over james' hot bod ;D

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Perfect ending for a perfect story! :) great read... Absolutely loved it

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I love this story! Please keep writing because you have a great talent!

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was i the only one thinking paige/sirius kiss at midnight? nice little twist in there

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we spell it colour in the uk too! its proper english!! love the story :)

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Please, please, please write a sequel i want more!
This is one of the best fan fictions i have read please write more!!!

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I love this story you have done a great job!!
Poor Paige, what an spiteful mum! gr!
I like Amy heaps she is such a funny character and you have made me laugh a few times with some strange situations!!
Also in Australia we spell colour and favourite like that and it's nice to read a story that has the correct spelling haha! I think Ill check out the Weasley story in the aformentioned chapter as well. :) Keep writing!

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Aww finally!!! That was adorable (Remus and Amy)

That was really cute of Sirius too!
I do wish though that we could have seen more Sirius and Paige interactions before. Like how he knows her so well with the ice cream, I just feel that we didn't get to see them getting to know eachother very well.
If that makes sense?
Anyways.. good job!! :)

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He he I love Remus :)

But poor Sirius!! So sad!!! Paige is laaame.. ;)

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I really like it.
However, I do think that Sirius kissing her kind of came out of nowhere. He never really seemed to show much interest in her before, so it kind of just doesn't seem right.

Good job though with everything else!

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Ha ha I loved the quidditch bit!!

What does Lucius have under his sleeve ha ha ha
Good job!!

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hahaha woot woot!!
i hope remus and amy get a move on!
good chapter!!!

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Loved it!! Great job!!

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I really like Amy!!!
Good job on this chapter!
Added it to my favorites!

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So far I really like it! I like the characters!!
I hope they befriend Lily! I think that would be good :)
Good job!!

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this was really good, i loved paiges character, you had me laughing out loud (i do love immaturity) can wait to read more stories (:

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Haven't laughed so hard in a while! Thanks?

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She FLINCHED? Way to leave it all hopeful and then just drop me off of a cliff... How can she not like him?! GR!!!

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AW! I love it, but it's a little bit cheesy...isn't it?

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Loved it!! So funny!! XD

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Simply beautiful writing on your part, prosgal!
I appreciated that you didn't kill Paige like some other authors of Sirius/OC stories. But I was upset that there could never be a happily ever after. I really despise JKR for killing Sirius. *sigh* I was crying for days when I read the fifth book. It's ok, he'll always be alive in my world and thank-you for respecting his character and making my day. Keep writing and I will surely keep reading.
xoxo,
fangirl23

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This is going to be the last review I leave for this. Why? Well, I don't think you are around anymore for one thing. Second, there is too much telling about your OCs background and not enough showing. Nothing is happening. Dull... big time.

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There is way to much 'nothing' stuffed into this chapter. I agree partially with one of your reviewers, that in the first chapter, your two OCs are presented realistically.

However, the thing is... that kind of piercing was NOT in style for the Maurader's time frame. Goodness, I don't know WHAT parent would let a twelve year old pierce their ears like that.
Also, their crushing seems to be at an older level to.

The leperchan thing... it was just way too random.

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