{reviewid: 2640206, reviewer: 'jellybean2109'}
7th January 2012:
i love how cute this story is but why does it keep switching between english and spanish
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{reviewid: 2257477, reviewer: 'k8'}
23rd November 2009:
i didn't really like it and i don't know y ! i liked the start thow
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{reviewid: 1692176, reviewer: 'HarryndGinny'}
31st October 2007:
Ah. That's so sweet! But why is it in Spanish? Love it!
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{reviewid: 1485670, reviewer: 'Devy'}
28th June 2007:
That's so sweet!!! I love it it was so cute!!
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{reviewid: 1291601, reviewer: 'GinnyWeasleyFan'}
3rd February 2007:
that was cute but a little hard to read with some of the parts being in spanish... maybe you could fix that...8/10
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{reviewid: 1199017, reviewer: 'evan'}
18th November 2006:
aw it was sweet - but didn't understand a few words wriiten in some other language definately not english- but it was good
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{reviewid: 925841, reviewer: 'i_love_dan'}
5th March 2006:
umm, you got some spanish words in there, so it's kinda weird to read and understand... i guess you can get what ur saying, but it would be better if you changed them, just for the reader's sake
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{reviewid: 925840, reviewer: 'i_love_dan'}
5th March 2006:
umm, you got some spanish words in there, so it's kinda weird to read and understand... i guess you can get what ur saying, but it would be better if you changed them, just for the reader's sake
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{reviewid: 919135, reviewer: 'Kay'}
27th February 2006:
Haha these people really need to read your author's note!! Anyway it was a really cute story, good job!
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{reviewid: 919127, reviewer: 'Kay'}
27th February 2006:
Haha these people really need to read your author's note!! Anyway it was a really cute story, good job!
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{reviewid: 912206, reviewer: 'rachel'}
22nd February 2006:
I liked the fic and i think it was very good, the spanish does add a good touch! I would like to picture harry with a spanish accent lol! Bueno noches!
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{reviewid: 872969, reviewer: 's'}
24th January 2006:
do you speak english?
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{reviewid: 845572, reviewer: 'Nitwit_T'}
6th January 2006:
Hey fluffy! I like the spanish ending =D! Nice finishing touch! But all the spanish mix ups was a bit confusing. I mean, I could hint what it means, but maybe it was wrong. Buuut you get a 9/10! Read my story please? Leave a review if you could..=)
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{reviewid: 835102, reviewer: 'ally'}
31st December 2005:
ur story needs some editing! some of the words are in spanish or some language like that, and it's pretty confusing!
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{reviewid: 563718, reviewer: 'SummerQueen'}
25th June 2005:
Well, very good, but what's with all the spanish? I don't think they would know spanish really.
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{reviewid: 144039, reviewer: 'Stephanie'}
29th April 2004:
Um whats with all the spanish?
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{reviewid: 96925, reviewer: 'halobird'}
20th January 2004:
Wow, well writen! I think thats the best H/G fic I've ever read.
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{reviewid: 94521, reviewer: 'harryluvr'}
13th January 2004:
cute story but the spanish in there kinda threw me off
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{reviewid: 49397, reviewer: 'hannie'}
7th July 2003:
hey that was gr8......really sweet!!!
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{reviewid: 46764, reviewer: 'inaotaku'}
20th June 2003:
me estaba preguntando si puedes anadirle un capitulo mas prque me gusto tu historia essta cool!!!!!
i was wondering if u could add some chapters to this i really,really liked it please
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{reviewid: 46408, reviewer: 'ginny'}
18th June 2003:
good story!
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{reviewid: 45927, reviewer: 'Steve%20Jester'}
14th June 2003:
This is cute, I didn\'t like having to translate in some spots. If I\'m going to read Spanish, it would be in a Spanish fic. However, it is quite understandable. Good fic none the less.
Steve Jester
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{reviewid: 45628, reviewer: 'Professor%20McGonagall'}
12th June 2003:
Nice but too short. Take your time and flesh out the detail.
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{reviewid: 43842, reviewer: 'cassondra'}
29th May 2003:
i thought the story was very good but i also thought that it needed a better description of the common room they were in.
that and the spanish words lol. but besides that it was really good.
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