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Review #1, by squaredancer slytherins on the train

15th November 2003:
This story has a good plot so far, but may i suggest getting a BETA reader? You may already have one and used them in the next chapters, but i have only read the first. If you do have a BETA reader already, may i suggest that you send this chapter to them and get them to edit it and repost it? That is the only criticism that i have to make, other than that a very good story. :)

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Review #2, by DracoisHott slytherins on the train

9th November 2003:
I'm sure they haven't ditched your story. It's too good to ditch! ^_^. See, it might be because you haven't updated in a while, because as other people update thier stories, yours gets pushed farther and farther down the list. Does that make sense? i hope so. ^_^ Anywho, you should add a chapter soon to get it back up the list. Even if people were so rude as to ditch your story, I'm still a loyal fan! Hope I was of some assistance. ^_^

Author's Response: YOU MUST BE THE BEST FAN, OTHER THAN CHICABLUE, YOUR BOTH THE BEST, PLZ READ MY NEW AND LATEST STORY

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Review #3, by DracoisHott slytherins on the train

7th November 2003:
I don't think they forgot about the story, I think they just read it without reviewing. That's what I did at first but then I remembered and yeah.... Anyway, Please update it soon! I love it!

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Review #4, by prue part 3

4th October 2003:
Awsome story!!!!!!!!! Please Add More!!!!!!!!! Thanks for reading my story

Author's Response: Thanx / i will as soon as more people read my story and reveiw / no probs, were did you get the charactor's names from??

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Review #5, by DracoisHott part 3

18th September 2003:
YAY! Me and Frida are going out with the twins! Thank you so much! lol Please continue.

Author's Response: no prob, hey, everybody else hasn't read it yet and i'm getting worried that people have ditched my story. Have they?

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