Oh, I love the way you actually make Regulus sound human, so many other authors never do.

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i like it! differnt from the rest of yours a bit on the serious side but good!

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This is so sad. I feel so bad for Regulus

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Absolutely love it

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Yay I hoped that you had written another story. This one was really good 2! I love reading stuff about lesser characters, like regulas. I liked the link in the story when Regulas couldnt return Sirius hatful glare and then at the end he could. I have always wondered what may have happened to regulas latter in the books, because although sirius said that he was killed i kinda hope that he wasn't and that he is the one who destroyed the horxcrus in the 6th book, lol just a lil theroy i had, what are your opinions?!! I noticed that you have another story called something to do with horxcus's so maybe it says in that!!

Author's Response: Yeah, lesser characters are the most interesting to read about. And I DEFINATELY think R.A.B. is Regulus. Well, thanks for all the the reviews!

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I like what you wrote about the sporks in the beggining- one of my BFFs is obsessed with sporks so I found that funny... anyway, moving on to the story, it wasn't the best thing you have ever written (I am a huge fan of yours) but it was very good. I look foward to reading future chapters and more stories by you. Your insight on the Black family is wonderful. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: A huge fan of mine? Wow. You are completely awesome for reviewing so many of my stories, and I am liking you very much right now. And yeah, sporks rule!

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I liked that you wrote it from Regulus' point of view, that was very original, and most of it was really good, but there were some parts that i really didn't like. Like when you described the cousins - their ages and stuff, it just didn't sound natural. But other than that, yeah, it was good. I think you've earned a large, shiny spork the size of a serving spoon.

Author's Response: Thnaks for being honest. Yeah, I don't consider this one to be one of by better fics. It was mostly just weird plot bunnies hopping around in my head. But, yay, spork! Awesome!

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I just read your other reviews and I thought I should add that while I disn't read the first paragraph as "slashy," a good way to eliminate the confusion for others might be to word it in a different way. Perhaps in a more begrudging way, like a jealous younger brother might. Like how, until he was sorted into Griffindor, Sirius always got his way because he was handsome and outgoing. As I said, it's fine how it is, but if you wanted to change it, that might be one way to do it.

Author's Response: Okay, thanks for the advice. I think I'll try fixing it that way.

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I really like this one! It's a nice little insight into the mind of Regulus. I just finished a story in which Regulus makes an appearance, and while I was writing it, the Regulus I imagined was very much like yours. Good job!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I'm glad you thought my Regulus is like the Regulus you imagined :)

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Well, to be honest, when you first introduce Sirius in this story it does sound a bit slashy. Regulus's sorting was most certainly interesting as well as his thoughts though.

Author's Response: Thanks for the honest review... and for reading my author's note too.

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"Sirius was 15, three years older than myself. He was extremely handsome, with his shaggy black hair falling over his grey eyes. Not to mention the fact that Sirius had to be one of the most popular boys at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry" Ahahaha! Regulus sounds like he has a crush on his brother...like he's just another fanclub girl. =) But, seriously, I like this portrayal of Regulus...I don't think he was quite as evil as Sirius always makes him out to be in the books. That and the locket in the 6th book makes me speculate he wasn't a deatheater...well, he was...but I think "R.A.B." was him...so if it was he couldn't be all bad, right?

Author's Response: Pshh read the author's note, Brittney, it says not to take it in a slashy way... there is not incest going on here lol. And I do hope that he is R.A.B., because I'd really like to find out more about his character.

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Overall it's really good, but I would take out the third to last paragraph, that starts with "as the years went by..." that sentence made me a little confused as to how old Regulus is when he's writing this - if he's 12 then less than a year has passed since his Sorting. I guess you could change it to "as the months went by" though. Also, I think "forced to act like I despised every single Gryffindor" is a little strong - I'd change the word forced to pressured. BTW, I'd appreciate it if you'd review my Regulus fic too.

Author's Response: Oh... yes hehe i think i should change that i umm... didnt notice. but thanx for reviewing, and yeah, i'll check yours out.

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That was very interesting! The only thing that doesn't really work is that Bella is older than Cissy. I know, it really bugs me. I thought she was the youngest. But it says in the 6th book ... chapter Will and Won't ..."Quite," said Dumbledore. "And if such an enchantment exists, then the ownership of the house is most likely to pass to the eldest of Sirius's living relatives, which would mean his cousin, Bellatrix Lestrange." I'm not sure if you were trying to make it canon or not (if you weren't you did a really good job making it canon! : )) I like how you show a different side of Regulas. That he was more like Sirius than every one thought. A very good story. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: whoops i didnt think of that. well thanks for telling me, just in case i decide to use her again... but thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it, i really appreciate it!

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