ummm...they are only first years, so i don't think they would be calling each other hot or cute. did you do that when you were in 6th grade? i think not, but its your story. and the grammar isn't that good, but everyone improves. sorry, this isn't the nicest of reviews, but not all of them can be. ~Sara Report Review
What happened to Harry? Update soon!Author's Response: will do!!!thanks for reviewing!! Report Review
A good story, but you should try and add more chapters.Author's Response: i'm going to no matter what.....thanks for your thoughts and comments!! Report Review
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