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great extrodinary very beautiful touching and very j.k.rowling like

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v. good

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I is really sad because they love each other and they can not be together

Author's Response: read the sequel, it ends up all right... eventually.

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Wot do you mean the end? this is super, best i've read in a while!

Author's Response: well, the end normally means that the story is over, and thanks for the compliment!!!!! i just didn't know what 2 write anymore, i have a lily and james one that i'm working on, but it has themematic elements. should b up in a few days!!!!

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Very good. Definistly going to read the sequel

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That was a very short story i might say.

Author's Response: the sequel is really long, so it evens out in the end. it is one-shot, i might add.

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write more plzzzzzzzzz lol

Author's Response: ok, ok, i'm working on it. don't have a cow. lol.

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it was good

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Good beginnings! Everyone is tre to character which is what I look for in a good fan fic. Waiting for more!

Author's Response: I'm working on a few fan fics, so check back in a few days. :)

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you should write more these are very good.!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm working on it right now with my beta. "Hermione's Trials" is the sequel to "Christams Break," and it's almost done. Just another 1 1/2 chapters.

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