i like it but you are making a lot of mistakes

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Great chapter...again, a few spelling mistakes, but that's all right. I really like the sibling rivalry between Kim, Sophie and Michael. It's so cute how Harry says that "they don't make them like that at Hogwarts." - it's the exact same thing Ron said about Fleur in the 4th book. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!!!I know i got it from there lol

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i like this update soon

Author's Response: I will as soon as i can which will be this week unless my computer brakes again! Thanks for Reviewing!

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Ah, don't worry about the spelling, mine sucks too somtimes. Anyways please go on! It's very good! For a reward, here's a cookie!

Author's Response: COOKIE!!! lol yummy i will continue . you know whats funny this story just popped in my head and i was thought about not continueing but i see ppl actually like it its very surprising i will continue the next chapter might be Validated on wensday i dont know how long it will take ...Oh if you like my storys Read my siters Her penname is OwlEyez i love her storys ... I based Kimberly Kirkwood on my sister (named Kimberly ) lol....*IM NOT SOPHIE!* Keep reading

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LOL...yes, you do need to correct your spelling, which made it a bit difficult to read...and I got through it! However, this story is very interesting so far. I can't wait to see where you take it. It would make it easier for your readers if you didn't bold everything either lol. Don't forget to close your tags...ie < / b > without the spaces, of course :) Please give my fics a read if you have the chance...my first fanfic I ever wrote, "Harry Potter and the Phantom Assassin" is up, along with two others. I made the banner for all 3...but with a lot of help from my friend Yvette :) If you're too lazy to correct your own spelling and grammar...send it my way...and I'll see if I can't make you a decent-looking banner in exchange...with Yvette's permission, of course! Let me know either in a review or contact me through the contact link by my penname. I like Harry/OC fics, too! With this being your first fanfic...I think it's pretty good so far. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! i am going to correct it alittle and then i will send it too you so you can correct the things i missed . You can make me a banner if you want and thank you so my for considering it . lol harry/oc are my fave my sister likes them two you should read hers two her penname is OwlEyez (yes me and my sister are obsessed with the word eyez lol) I will read your fanfics .

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Please Please Update soon!!!!! ~Emily~

Author's Response: I wasnt going to finish this story but since you like it i will continue for the few ppl who read it , Oh and if you like my story then you might like my sisters her FanFic is called The Witch With Pink Eyez i like hope you will too

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Your story is really good! Keep writing!

Author's Response: Omg! you really like it? i thought no one would read it cool i will continue

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