hahah... Cute....

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Interesting. The dialogue between Lily and James is wonderful, as is their meetings. I don't really agree with the characterization of Lily, but you pulled it off wonderfully. Great job!

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nice!! i loved the story, yay! im so happy to see that SOME people know how to make lily NICE! anyway, you story was really good.

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Oh, I did love that! James was darling, absolutely precious. The whole story was done very well. Nothing was rushed; it all went at a very nice pace. I too have a love of shoes comparable to Lily's, so that made me smile silly. :) Oh, this was just lovely. I'm reading this on Valentine's Day, though, so it was slightly bittersweet for me. Where's my James? :( I would loooove for someone to do that to me, mmm hmmm. (Incidentally, I got myself a pair of shoes for Valentine's day instead of chocolate, haha! This really was the perfect story. ^_-) Thanks for a great read! This is going to my favorites. :) (Oh, by the way, I LOVED the last outtake! Haha!)

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I was laughing SO hard at this! especially the outakes! i think you should let Lily sing nicely though. terribly breaks my poor little heart! still laughing at that shoe outtake!

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You are now my official favourite of J/L fan fictions. I love your story ideas and at the end i always feel Happy!. Great work :-)

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Heh. Heh. Heh. James singing. MEH HEHEH. Loves it, dahling. we do need to confiscate that radio though. It is just GREAT to make Harry-like characters look like idiots, isn't it? mmhmm. Well, awesome story, i love shoes, all that. it would totally be awesome if some guy actually did that...and the way the kissed was happiful, too. :) Luna

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erm...weird, but good.... VERY weird, but good.

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Love it! It was sweet, funny and cute! Wonderful job!

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Lol wonderful story! ^___^ Once again Sirius was wonderfully funny! Keep up the great work!

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i'm *cough* sorry *cough* so *cough* funny *cough* *bursts out laughing again* great *cough* job *gasp* *laughter*

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fantastic as always! your one-shots are so great! i absolutely love them! keep up the fabulous job!

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you are so freaking hilarious! i love your stories! the outtakes are great...and i love sirius' reaction!

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That was so cute!! Haha I liked when James said 'you forgot the reciept,' lmao. And when he kicked her in the nose...classic!!

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LOL. Oh god, I've had fun reading your fics. This one was adorable! :D James with his stinky shoes and his sweat and stuff [I agree with you on the authors note =)] and her all perfect. It was great.

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*laugh* we *laugh* loved *laugh* it! *laugh*! you *laugh* have to *laugh* keep writing like this *laugh*!!!! WE LOVES YOU!!!!! ~Love, WINKY AND DOBBY!!~

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